On Fri, Dec 31, 2010 at 6:37 PM, Lydia Pintscher <[email protected]> wrote: > Heya folks :) > > I finished the first version of two chapters of my thesis and would > like to have some feedback from you. I am especially interested in > hearing if you agree with my findings so far or not and if I missed > something crucial. Typo/style comments and so on are welcome as well. > The chapters that are finished so far are 2:Fundamentals and > 4:Analysis of the Current Development Processes. You can find the > latest version at http://lydiapintscher.de/tmp/thesis.pdf >
This is a great start! I really liked the analysis of Amarok and it would be interesting to see how some of our problems can be solved based on Chapter 5. Chapter 2, Page 4 - Firefox is a 'web browser', not 'web browsers' Would it be possible to have better fonts in the Amarok 2.3.2 screenshot in section 2.4 ? :D The line: The goal for Amarok is to develop a program that can help its users to rediscover their music - leading to its tagline and motto “Rediscover Your Music”. can probably be rephrased to use "Rediscover Your Music" only once, making it shorter and memorable. Say: Amarok's goal and tagline is to develop a program that can help its users "Rediscover Your Music". But that is just my individual opinion. "I found live-long friends here" s/live/life/ A happy new year to everyone! Nikhil _______________________________________________ Amarok-devel mailing list [email protected] https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/amarok-devel
