On Wed, Mar 16, 2011 at 9:33 PM, Lydia Pintscher <ly...@kde.org> wrote: > Heya folks :) > > Valorie, Teo and I sat down to write the first draft for the vision > based on the input we gathered on the wiki page and in the meeting. > Now it's time to get feedback from all of you and polish it. > What we have at the moment is: > > "The Amarok team strives to develop a free and open music player that > is innovative and powerful, yet easy to use. Amarok helps rediscover > music by giving access to a vast amount of different music sources and > related information. In a world where music and computing are > everywhere, Amarok aims to provide the best music listening experience > anywhere, any time. The Amarok team promotes free culture. Amarok > makes people happy."
Looks good to me. One thing that I noticed while reading: It should be either "at any time", or "anytime". While "any time" is grammatically correct too, my impression is that this form isn't used much any more in contemporary English. Reference: "anytime, adv., = at any time; whenever. Some writers consider this term a CASUALISM, but it is highly convenient and has -- for whatever reason -- gained more widespread acceptance than anymore (in positive contexts) and anyplace. Garner's Modern American Usage" -- Mark Kretschmann Amarok Developer, Senior Software Engineer at Nokia Fellow of the Free Software Foundation Europe http://amarok.kde.org - http://fsfe.org - http://nokia.com _______________________________________________ Amarok-devel mailing list Amarok-devel@kde.org https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/amarok-devel