Sheng Jiang <jiangsh...@huawei.com> wrote:
    > Hi, authors of draft-ietf-anima-voucher,

    > I am doing a thorough review as the document shepherd with my ANIMA

okay.  We'll work through these on Tuesday (tomorrow).

    > A few DISCUSS & EDNOTE from editor notes should be removed.

Well, they are there to keep us from advancing the document with issues
unresolved :-)

    > The normative words in design consideration seems odd for me. The
    > design consideration means not protocol definition neither behavior
    > specification although security consideration may be specification in
    > my eyes. It should not have normative words.

Perhaps naming it Design Considerations is the error.
I don't see the normative words there as wrong; they need to be there.

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Michael Richardson <mcr+i...@sandelman.ca>, Sandelman Software Works
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