Kent asked me to review the changes, and I thought it best to just post to the list since I think my text is a good short summary.
Much are based on edits two weeks as as a result of Sheng's thorough review. https://tools.ietf.org/tools/rfcdiff/rfcdiff.pyht?url1=draft-ietf-anima-voucher-02&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/anima-wg/voucher/master/draft-ietf-anima-voucher.txt I didn't find reading the diffs of the XML too informative, so I did the above diff... So summary is: Removed terms: Voucher, Domain, Domain CA. Added terms: Pledge, TOFU. Word smithing on terms. We simplified the voucher contents (in the YANG) as a result of considerations for short-lived vouchers. We added RFC2119 language to the YANG definitions. I'm extremely pleased with your section 6.1 text. Very well done! -- Michael Richardson <[email protected]>, Sandelman Software Works -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-
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