Thanks a lot, Mohamed for the thorough review! I pushed -04 of the draft out with your changes incorporated. IMHO it's all great textual improvements but no logical changes, aka: should be fine for prior reviewers.
Diff: http://tools.ietf.org/tools/rfcdiff/rfcdiff.pyht?url1=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-03.txt&url2=https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-04.txt Your original review doc: https://github.com/anima-wg/autonomic-control-plane/blob/master/draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity/03-review-mohamed.boucadair.doc My reply comments: https://github.com/anima-wg/autonomic-control-plane/blob/master/draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity/03-review-mohamed.boucadair-reply.txt While incorporating your review, i also figured that it would be good if ACP connect would allow auto-configuration of NMS hosts, so i added a paragraph to mandate RFC4191, but i didn't rev ACP draft just for that yet, so here's just diff on github for that; http://tools.ietf.org/tools/rfcdiff/rfcdiff.pyht?url1=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-08.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/anima-wg/autonomic-control-plane/af74117400b6a5a7fca1acf2ab910d64a580a5c9/draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane/draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane.txt Cheers Toerless On Mon, Jul 24, 2017 at 05:49:07AM +0000, [email protected] wrote: > Dear Toreless, > > I'm resending this document as I didn't receive an ACK from your side. > > Please consider those as part of the WGLC comments. > > Cheers, > Med > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN > > Envoyé : vendredi 7 juillet 2017 14:58 > > À : '[email protected]' > > Objet : Envoi d?un message : draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-03-rev > > Med.doc > > > > Dear Toreless, > > > > Please find some comments about this draft. > > > > Cheers, > > Med _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
