Hi, I will review this carefully soon, but I already noticed one nit. The IANA Considerations needs to include registration of the two GRASP objectives. There's a model for that at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-05#section-8 and the registry even exists: https://www.iana.org/assignments/grasp-parameters/grasp-parameters.xhtml#objective-names
Regards Brian On 14/10/2017 06:33, [email protected] wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and > Approach WG of the IETF. > > Title : Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key Infrastructures > (BRSKI) > Authors : Max Pritikin > Michael C. Richardson > Michael H. Behringer > Steinthor Bjarnason > Kent Watsen > Filename : draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-08.txt > Pages : 59 > Date : 2017-10-13 > > Abstract: > This document specifies automated bootstrapping of a remote secure > key infrastructure (BRSKI) using vendor installed X.509 certificate, > in combination with a vendor's authorizing service, both online and > offline. Bootstrapping a new device can occur using a routable > address and a cloud service, or using only link-local connectivity, > or on limited/disconnected networks. Support for lower security > models, including devices with minimal identity, is described for > legacy reasons but not encouraged. Bootstrapping is complete when > the cryptographic identity of the new key infrastructure is > successfully deployed to the device but the established secure > connection can be used to deploy a locally issued certificate to the > device as well. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-08 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-08 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-08 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > I-D-Announce mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce > Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html > or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt > _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
