Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-anima-voucher-06: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-voucher/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Just some editorial comments: - Abstract: I suspect readers will not understand the meaning of "pledge". The abstract should be understandable without referencing the terminology section. -4, definition of Assertion Basis" : is "secure root of trust of measurement" a term of art, or a typo? -7.1, first paragraph: s/understand/understanding _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list Anima@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
