Hi,

Am 18.01.2018 um 19:46 schrieb Michael Richardson:

> I have read the -05 document.  An -06 is needed which just tightens the
> text up slightly.
> I know that Toerless has put a lot of editing cycles on this document, I
> think that it needs a pass from another of the authors to tweak some things.

+1

I started to read it and my impression was the same.
I'll send more detailed comments later this week.

Regards,
 Roland

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