Hi, This looks like all good stuff to me and I don't have much to say.
> The domain is embodied by the Registrar component. I think that's a step too far, because the Registrar doesn't do anything to establish the domain boundary and which nodes are at the edges of the domain. So I think it's better to say "The Registrar component embodies the identity, membership and trust anchor of the domain." [The identity being the DomainID, and the membership being the set of currently enrolled pledges. The registrar is the trust anchor because it either contains or interfaces with the CA.] > This document, while a Best Current Practices, makes use of BCP14 > language to indicate which practices are mandatory, and which ones > are just recommendations. Did you mean to write "while *not* a BCP"? In any case you've tagged the draft for the standards track, which seems wrong. Regards Brian On 03-Dec-19 04:16, [email protected] wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > > Title : Operational Considerations for BRSKI Registrar > Author : Michael Richardson > Filename : draft-richardson-anima-registrar-considerations-00.txt > Pages : 18 > Date : 2019-12-02 > > Abstract: > This document describes a number of operational modes that a BRSKI > Registration Authority (Registrar) may take on. > > Each mode is defined, and then each mode is given a relevance within > an over applicability of what kind of organization the Registrar is > deployed into. This document does not change any protocol > mechanisms. > > This document includes operational advice about avoiding unwanted > consequences. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-richardson-anima-registrar-considerations/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-richardson-anima-registrar-considerations-00 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-richardson-anima-registrar-considerations-00 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > I-D-Announce mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce > Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html > or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt > _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
