Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-28: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- (1) §6: "An ACP node... Initially, it MUST have...an (empty) ACP Adjacency Table..." Is "empty" a requirement? I'm wondering because §6.2 says that the adjacency table can also contain configured information, which I assume would be present before neighbor discovery starts. (2) As far as I understand, events happen in this order: The ACP Adjacency Table (§6.2) is populated with information from DULL GRASP (§6.3). Based on that information, a candidate set of neighbors is selected (§6.4). Is that correct? §6.4 (Candidate ACP Neighbor Selection) says that the "ACP is established exclusively between nodes in the same domain". However, the domain membership check is not performed until later (§6.6). How are the candidate nodes selected in §6.4? Some nodes may not be chosen, right? How can it be verified that the candidate nodes are in the same domain without performing the domain membership check first? §6.6 says that "the connection attempt is aborted" if the domain membership check fails -- but there is no mention about considering other candidates. It seems to me as if it may be possible for some selected candidates to not pass the domain membership check... What am I missing? (3) §6.11.1.8 (Multicast): s/Not used yet but possible because of the selected mode of operations./Not used but possible if the selected MOP is 3. (4) [nits] s/explanation how ACP acts/explanation of how ACP acts s/nodes ACP certificate/node's ACP certificate/g s/nodes ACP address/node's ACP address _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
