Rob we have been working on responses to your AD comments and thread at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/last-call/WJGNmZ0s3-FtKz4DE-6HhjzacuA/
I think that somewhere in the thread you mentioned that you thought the document should be returned to the WG for a second WGLC? In -13 (not yet published: our discussions ended after deadline), we have made changes to bits-on-the-wire representation for the stateless case. We published -12 this week, which contains all other changes. The WG should form an opinion about that, and my notes below explain this. We have made the following significant changes since -10. These can be viewed at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-10&url_2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/anima-wg/constrained-join-proxy/encrypted-jpy/draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy.txt 1. We moved the bulk of the discovery description from constrained-join-proxy to section 10 of constrained-voucher. https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-constrained-voucher-18.html#name-extensions-to-discovery In constrained-join-proxy, we extend the GRASP to cover the stateless case only at: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-11.html#name-grasp-discovery 2. We made figure 1 a bit more complex to show the mesh situation. 3. We changed the statement about implementation of the two states: A Join Proxy MAY implement both. -> A Join Proxy MUST implement both. {MCR: I'm really not sure that this is the right statement at all} 4. We changed the JPY_message from being standardized to being opaque. There is a suggestion on how to use it, but it now is much closer to how the CoAP Extended Token (RFC8974) works! This part did not get into draft version -11 (will be in -12), but the pull request (now merged) can be found at: https://github.com/anima-wg/constrained-join-proxy/pull/31/files THIS IS A BITS ON THE WIRE CHANGE during WGLC. The WG needs to review this. I think that these are the major points. Slides relating to these changes: https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/114/materials/slides-114-anima-constrained-join-proxy-changes-from-ad-and-review-comments-00 -- Michael Richardson <[email protected]> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide
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