Dear Anima WG, co-chairs, and authors I started my shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm. I currently see the need for some restructuring to make the draft clearer to the reader and easier to implement. Hence my review is done as work-in-progress pull request in the GitHub repo of the draft [1].
Comments by Toerless have been captured as issues by the draft authors and will be resolved after the pull request is merged; where possible, they can be addressed in iterations going into the shepherd-review branch [2]. Best wishes, Matthias [1] https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/pull/85 [2] https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/tree/shepherd-review
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