Thank you Thomas -éric
From: Werner, Thomas <[email protected]> Date: Thursday, 28 November 2024 at 17:33 To: Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[email protected]>, The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: AW: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-13: (with COMMENT) Eric, thanks a lot for your valuable feedback. Your comment will be respected in the next version: 1. „abstract uses YANG-defined“ -> comes from rfc8366 / rfc8366bis, so we would keep it 2. “introduction YANG-based” -> will be changed to “YANG data model” Best regards Thomas Von: Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[email protected]> Datum: Donnerstag, 28. November 2024 um 08:51 An: The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Betreff: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-13: (with COMMENT) Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-13: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fabout%2Fgroups%2Fiesg%2Fstatements%2Fhandling-ballot-positions%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cthomas-werner%40siemens.com%7C00f47253de564891e23308dd0f8167db%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638683770651121061%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=GL5hr%2FOYEw2fYwC0SGW5gfYwLPRrv35AlTn6BOrzIsE%3D&reserved=0<https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/> for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cthomas-werner%40siemens.com%7C00f47253de564891e23308dd0f8167db%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638683770651150257%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=rFk9MIJ6S5HzopqnAheYPlpiF7yZ07Y0p7ZfUWCmDbk%3D&reserved=0<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher/> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for the work done in this document, may I also add that the text is easy to read and understand? Thanks also to Matthias Kovatsch for the exhaustive shepherd's write-up (noting that the WGLC did not generate any comment...). Thanks also to Eliot Lear, the IoT directorate reviewer, see https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Freview-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-12-iotdir-lc-lear-2024-09-16%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cthomas-werner%40siemens.com%7C00f47253de564891e23308dd0f8167db%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638683770651165670%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=vihxNsczuUOkC0TWQYDqJOANTfNSvukw9X6XRV6iX%2FI%3D&reserved=0<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-12-iotdir-lc-lear-2024-09-16/> One minor quick comment though: is there any reason why the abstract uses YANG-defined and the introduction YANG-based (both terms are weird though and bring little value especially in the abstract) ?
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