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> actual inaccuracies, corrections have been applied.  In
> the future it would be helpful if you would include the
> name of the page on which you found each error.

Ok, I'll do so.

> What makes you think the <VirtualHost> syntax is wrong?
> "<VirtualHost 10.0.0.1:80 10.0.0.2:8080>" is perfectly
> valid.

Yes, I know, but I cannot read that "..." means [addr[:port] ...].
There are many descriptions like this, but I don't think they are good.

For example:
AccessFileName filename filename ...
-> AccessFileName filename [filename ...]

AddModule module module ...
-> AddModule module [module ...]


Anyway, I point out some lacks of unity:
- "boolean", "on | off", "On | Off"
  I know they are case insensitive, but there are no description and
  I fear this causes confusion.
- "A | B", "A or B", "'A' or 'B'"
- In some modules' manual:
        xxx directive
        Syntax:
        ...
  others:
        xxx
        Syntax:
        ...


One more thing,
in manual/mod/core.html#servername, "fully-qualified domain name"
seems that there are 3 arguments. This should be changed to "FQDN" or
"fully-qualified-domain-name".


Regards,

-- Koga, Youichirou

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