On Thu, 14 Dec 2000, Cliff Woolley wrote: > > --- Joshua Slive <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Comments VERY welcome. > > Looks good. I just have a few comments:
Thanks! Things always turn out much better when several sets of eyes look over the problem. I incorporated most of your suggestions. And a new draft is at http://garibaldi.commerce.ubc.ca:8080/ap13/htdocs/manual/mod/mod_access.html I understand what you said about "short circuiting", but I don't really see what the statement adds to the documentation. It seems obvious to me. (And when something that seems obvious is printed in bold, I tend to think that I must have missed something.) More comments are always welcome. Joshua.