Yoshiki Hayashi wrote: > > I think this is correct fix but I'm not really comfortable > with my English. :-) Could someone review this change?
Did not see any reply to this. Some are good, some are not: > -work. <EM>Filename</EM> is either and absolute path or relative to <A > +work. <EM>Filename</EM> is either an absolute path or relative to <A Good. > -it must be the LoadModule directive requires the exact filename, no > +the LoadModule directive requires the exact filename, no Good. > -How good a defense is it? Well suppose that one of your machines serves > +How good a defense is it? We'll suppose that one of your machines serves Not good. "Well suppose" should be "Well, suppose". > encoding the 112-bit (32-bit IP address, 32 bit pid, 32 bit time stamp, > -16 bit counter) quadruple using the alphabet <CODE>[EMAIL PROTECTED]</CODE> > +16 bit counter quadruple) using the alphabet <CODE>[EMAIL PROTECTED]</CODE> Not good. The phrase is "112-bit quadruple" with an enclosed parenthetical explanation. The original text is correct. -- #ken P-)} Ken Coar, Sanagendamgagwedweinini http://Golux.Com/coar/ Apache Software Foundation http://www.apache.org/ "Apache Server for Dummies" http://Apache-Server.Com/ "Apache Server Unleashed" http://ApacheUnleashed.Com/ --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
