Hi Michael,

Both comments are fixed in my working copy.

Thank you,

  Martin

On 09/15/2013 02:29 PM, Michael Welzl wrote:
Hi,

I like the charter and support creation of the group. Just a few nits:


  that are found to be broadly applicable and beneficial.  Evaluating
  these algorithms shall be done in coordination with the Internet
  Congestion Control Research Ground (ICCRG), and related IETF Working

s/Ground/Group


  Combined Queue Management / Packet Scheduling algorithms are in-scope,
  provided their benefit have been evaluated against the established
  requirements for an AQM algorithm. It is expected that some classes of

This should be "their benefit_s_ have been evaluated" or "their benefit has been 
evaluated"  (I prefer the former because these mechanisms typically have multiple benefits).

Cheers,
Michael

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