"Benoit Claise" <[email protected]> writes:

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> COMMENT:
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Hi Benoit

Thank you for your comments. An updated version that addresses them as
laid out below is available here:
https://kau.toke.dk/ietf/draft-ietf-aqm-fq-codel-06.html (or .txt).

> - Is the following really necessary: 
>
>    In this document, these words will appear with that interpretation
>    only when in ALL CAPS.  Lower case uses of these words are not to be
>    interpreted as carrying [RFC2119] significance.

I've elected to keep this as per Barry's comment.

> - section 6
>    While FQ-CoDel has been shown in many scenarios to offer significant
>    performance gains, there are some scenarios where the scheduling
>    algorithm in particular is not a good fit. 
>
> Gains compared to?

I've amended this to read "..offer significant performance gains compared
to alternative queue management strategies.."

> - From Jürgen's OPS DIR review:
> The working draft still says this:
>
>   and we encourage such implementations be widely deployed
>
> It is unclear what 'we' is. This is something I think that needs to be
> fixed since people will come up with different interpretation of such
> a recommendation. (In a scientific paper, it would be clear that 'we'
> refers to the authors but in documents coming out of IETF WGs, the
> notion of what is 'we' is not so clear anymore.

Yes, several people have pointed this out. I've changed this to read "to
enable deployment outside of the Linux ecosystem".

-Toke

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