Hi Rong,
  Sounds good. All your proposed changes look good but one. Please see inline.

On 05/23/2016 08:28 PM, Rong Pan (ropan) wrote:
>> Section 5.3:
>>
>> What does the following text intend to say? Do you mean when it is turned
>> off?
>>
>> "When PIE is optionally turned on and off, ..."
> 
> How about ³PIE can automatically turn on and off"?

Not sure if this new text will make it any clearer. I was guessing more "When
PIE is turned off,..." but was not sure. Does that make sense to you?

Thanks
Suresh



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