Thanks; I've completed the shepherd write-up now, and sent it to Mirja
for AD review.
I noticed that references [6] and [7] are duplicates, and the text
citing them is mangled ... but this can be noted for bundling with other
fixes that may result from AD review, IETF last call, or IESG review.
On 10/31/2016 8:12 PM, Jana Iyengar wrote:
Hi all,
We've submitted an updated version of the draft. I believe this
addresses all outstanding comments on the draft.
Specifically, it addresses all the nits Wes pointed out. It also
addresses the two concerns raised on the list earlier:
1. Inconsistency between text and algorithm on 1.1 x interval. We've
changed the text to be consistent with the pseudo-code, which is 1.0 x
interval.
2. We've added some text around the frequency and importance of
re-entering dropping state. Specifically, the last two sentences in
the following para of Sec 4.1:
"Additional logic prevents re-entering the dropping state too soon
after exiting it and resumes the dropping state at a recent control
level, if one exists. This logic is described more precisely in the
pseudo-code below. Additional work is required to determine the
frequency and importance of re-entering the dropping state."
Thanks,
- jana
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Name: draft-ietf-aqm-codel
Revision: 05
Title: Controlled Delay Active Queue Management
Document date: 2016-10-31
Group: aqm
Pages: 28
URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-aqm-codel-05.txt
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Abstract:
This document describes a general framework called CoDel (Controlled
Delay) that controls bufferbloat-generated excess delay in modern
networking environments. CoDel consists of an estimator, a setpoint,
and a control loop. It requires no configuration in normal Internet
deployments. CoDel comprises some major technical innovations and
has been made available as open source so that the framework can be
applied by the community to a range of problems. It has been
implemented in Linux (and available in the Linux distribution) and
deployed in some networks at the consumer edge. In addition, the
framework has been successfully applied in other ways.
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