Howdy, These changes seem fine to me. Won't be able to attend discussion later today so wanted to go on record as supporting the changes.
Celeste Anderson [email protected] ________________________________ From: ARIN-PPML <[email protected]> on behalf of Sean Hopkins <[email protected]> Sent: Thursday, March 25, 2021 2:19 PM To: Chris Woodfield <[email protected]>; Martin Hannigan <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [arin-ppml] Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and Related Provisions Hi Chris, Martin, and PPML, The proposed language changes in https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/arin_edit_2020_9_v2.pdf__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63pg_ugrc$ have been captured in a markup document viewable at https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/ARIN_edit_2020_9_markup.pdf__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63h250uFk$ . Sean Hopkins Senior Policy Analyst American Registry for Internet Numbers > On Mar 25, 2021, at 10:54 AM, Sean Hopkins <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Chris, Martin, and PPML, > > Staff will generate a marked-up document that mirrors the proposed language > changes in > https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/arin_edit_2020_9_v2.pdf__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63pg_ugrc$ > . I will update the list once complete. > > Sean Hopkins > Senior Policy Analyst > American Registry for Internet Numbers > >> On Mar 23, 2021, at 5:26 PM, Chris Woodfield <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Agreed - the linked PDF does not show any redlined changes. Was the wrong >> version of the PDF posted? >> >> -C >> >>> On Mar 23, 2021, at 8:17 AM, Martin Hannigan <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>> >>> >>> Did you mean to say that there was a markup "red line" showing the changes? >>> If there is, I don't see it or anything that lets someone easily ascertain >>> what's being proposed change wise. >>> >>> >>> >>> On Tue, Mar 23, 2021 at 11:11 AM ARIN <[email protected]> wrote: >>> On 18 March 2021, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) classified "ARIN-2020-9: >>> Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and Related Provisions" as an >>> Editorial Change to the Number Resource Policy Manual (NRPM). >>> >>> >>> >>> The text is below and can be found at: >>> >>> >>> >>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63Tn01qZo$ >>> >>> >>> >>> The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1, >>> paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP): >>> >>> >>> >>> "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature >>> are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only >>> be made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the >>> ARIN Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are >>> non-substantial in nature." >>> >>> >>> >>> Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged. The review period >>> will close on 22 April 2021. >>> >>> >>> >>> The Number Resource Policy Manual is available at: >>> >>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63fYQiIZ4$ >>> >>> >>> >>> The PDP is available at: >>> >>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63nEKbaDc$ >>> >>> >>> >>> Regards, >>> >>> >>> >>> Sean Hopkins >>> >>> Senior Policy Analyst >>> >>> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN) >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and >>> Related Provisions >>> >>> >>> >>> Problem Statement: >>> >>> >>> >>> ARIN staff have identified some areas of potential editorial clean-up of >>> section 4 of the NRPM. Building on those recommendations the ARIN AC NRPM >>> Clean-up Working Group undertook an editorial review of section 4. >>> >>> >>> >>> The focus of the review was to clarify and simplify language, employ >>> consistent and more up to date terminology throughout and renumber the >>> sections after removing section numbers that were no longer being utilized. >>> In the course of this work, we discovered the need for certain changes to >>> sections 2, 3, and 6. We included those that are editorial in nature in >>> this proposal. >>> >>> >>> >>> Other changes to those three sections will be addressed in subsequent >>> proposals. We are also proposing that the NRPM Table of Contents be updated >>> to reflect the editorial changes to the NRPM contents contained in this >>> proposal. >>> >>> >>> >>> Policy Statement: >>> >>> >>> >>> The changes proposed to be made in this editorial proposal are too numerous >>> to list individually. Accordingly, a document is provided at >>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/arin_edit_2020_9_v2.pdf__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63pg_ugrc$ >>> that shows the changes being proposed as mark-up text relative to the >>> version of the NRPM in effect when the editorial work of the Working Group >>> started. >>> >>> >>> >>> Timetable for Implementation: Immediate >>> >>> >>> >>> Anything Else: >>> >>> >>> >>> This proposal is intended to be editorial in nature. >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> ARIN-PPML >>> You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to >>> the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). >>> Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: >>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63kmJ5wgk$ >>> Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. >>> _______________________________________________ >>> ARIN-PPML >>> You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to >>> the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). >>> Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: >>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63kmJ5wgk$ >>> Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. >> >> _______________________________________________ >> ARIN-PPML >> You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to >> the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). >> Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml__;!!LIr3w8kk_Xxm!-nXPFoAOOSBbmMSatNRCtcDb79vleSdw1yNnB_yHrSforI4ZoZ9nLB63kmJ5wgk$ >> Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. > _______________________________________________ ARIN-PPML You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). 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