I agree with Bill here. Further, yes, “number resources”, not “numbering resources”.
Owen > On Jul 14, 2022, at 10:06 , William Herrin <[email protected]> wrote: > > On Thu, Jul 14, 2022 at 7:57 AM WOOD Alison * DAS > <[email protected]> wrote: >> My name is Alison Wood and I am one of the assigned shepherds to prop 310. >> The proposal would like to change the phrase “IP address space” to “Internet >> numbering resources” in section 2.1 and “address space” to “numbering >> resources” in section 2.2. > > Hi Alison, > > The purpose of the section is to explain things to people who aren't > insiders. Using an insider term like "number resources" without > explanation makes things about as clear as mud. > > Try, "Internet number resources such as IP addresses." Actually, I'd > correct base section 2 the same way and keep repeating it throughout > the definitions so that no matter where folks jump in it's > comprehensible. > > Regards, > Bill Herrin > > > -- > For hire. https://bill.herrin.us/resume/ > _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. _______________________________________________ ARIN-PPML You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues.
