I believe these changes do not materially affect the meaning of the passage and therefore do support treatment of this as an editorial change.
Owen > On Jul 26, 2022, at 14:35, ARIN <[email protected]> wrote: > > On 21 July 2022, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) accepted "ARIN-prop-312: > Clean-up of NRPM Section 2.11" as a Draft Policy. > > Draft Policy ARIN-2022-5 is below and can be found at: > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2022_5/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2022_5/> > > You are encouraged to discuss all Draft Policies on PPML. The AC will > evaluate the discussion to assess the conformance of this draft policy with > ARIN's Principles of Internet number resource policy as stated in the Policy > Development Process (PDP). Specifically, these principles are: > > * Enabling Fair and Impartial Number Resource Administration > * Technically Sound > * Supported by the Community > > The PDP can be found at: > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/> > > Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at: > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/> > > Regards, > > Sean Hopkins > Senior Policy Analyst > American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN) > > > Draft Policy ARIN-2022-5: Clean-up of NRPM Section 2.11 > > Problem Statement: > > This proposal continues the work that the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group > undertook to conduct an editorial review of the NRPM. It relates specifically > to Section 2.11. The focus of this proposal is to ensure that the intended > meaning of the text is clear. > > Policy statement: > > Change the text “A community network is deployed, operated and governed by > its users” to “A community network is one that is deployed, operated and > governed by its users” in the first line and change the text “to the user > community it services” to “to the community it services” in the second line. > > Timetable for implementation: Immediate > > Comments: > > This proposal is intended to replace Prop-305 in part. Although the proposal > was drafted in the course of an editorial review of Section 2.11, some of the > changes proposed may not be considered purely editorial in nature and so this > proposal is not being presented as strictly editorial. > _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > <https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml> > Please contact [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> if you experience any > issues.
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