I support this as an editorial change.

Owen


> On Oct 26, 2022, at 10:35 , ARIN <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> On 21 October 2022, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) classified 
> "ARIN-edit-2022-4: Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.1 and 2.2" as a Draft Policy.
>  
> Draft Policy ARIN-2022-4 is below and can be found at:
>  
> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2022_4/ 
> <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2022_4/>
>  
> You are encouraged to discuss all Draft Policies on PPML. The AC will 
> evaluate the discussion to assess the conformance of this draft policy with 
> ARIN's Principles of Internet number resource policy as stated in the Policy 
> Development Process (PDP). Specifically, these principles are:
>  
> * Enabling Fair and Impartial Number Resource Administration
> * Technically Sound
> * Supported by the Community
>  
> The PDP can be found at:
>  
> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ 
> <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/>
>  
> Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at: 
> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ 
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>  
> Regards,
>  
> Sean Hopkins
> Senior Policy Analyst
> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)
>  
>  
> Draft Policy ARIN-2022-4: Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.1 and 2.2 
>  
> Problem Statement:
>  
> This proposal continues the work that the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group 
> undertook to conduct an editorial review of the NRPM. It relates specifically 
> to Sections 2.1 and 2.2. The focus of this proposal is to increase the 
> consistency of terminology employed in the NRPM.
>  
> Policy statement:
>  
> In Section 2.1, change the text “IP address space” to “Internet number 
> resources”, and in Section 2.2, change the text “address space” to “number 
> resources” to reflect all of the types of Internet number resources 
> administered by the types of entities defined in those sections.
>  
> Timetable for implementation: Immediate
>  
> Comments:
>  
> This proposal is intended to replace Prop-305 in part. Although the proposal 
> was drafted in the course of an editorial review of Sections 2.1 and 2.2, 
> some of the changes proposed may not be considered purely editorial in nature 
> and so this proposal is not being presented as strictly editorial.
>  
>  
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