I support this as an editorial change. Owen
> On Oct 26, 2022, at 10:43 , ARIN <[email protected]> wrote: > > On 21 October 2022, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) submitted > "ARIN-edit-2022-10: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.4 and 2.5" to a new > community review period with corrected text to reflect the August revision. > > The text is below and can be found at: > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2022_10/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2022_10/> > > The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1, > paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP): > > "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature > are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only be > made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the ARIN > Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are > non-substantial in nature." > > Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged. The review period will > close on 26 November 2022, considering the Thanksgiving holiday. > > The Number Resource Policy Manual is available at: > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/> > > The PDP is available at: > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/> > > Regards, > > Sean Hopkins > Senior Policy Analyst > American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN) > > > > Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2022-10: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.4 > and 2.5 > > Problem Statement: > > This proposal continues the work that the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group > undertook to conduct an editorial review of the NRPM. It relates specifically > to Sections 2.4 and 2.5. The focus of this proposal is to increase the > consistency of terminology employed in the NRPM and ensure that the intended > meaning of the text is clear. > > Policy Statement: > > In Section 2.4, change the text “address space” to “IP addresses”, and remove > the comma after the text “(ISPs)”, and in Section 2.5, change the text > “Address space” to “IP addresses” in each of the first four paragraphs and > change the text “address space” to “IP addresses” in the last paragraph. > > Timetable for Implementation: Immediate > > Comments: > > This proposal is intended to be editorial in nature and to replace Prop-305 > in part. > > > _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > <https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml> > Please contact [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> if you experience any > issues.
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