D6, while having one of the best music by our man, is unsatisfying as a 
movie.

Would members like to talk about how this film could be made good, by 
changing script, placement of songs/ scenes, etc.

Nothing can be done about the movie. The intention is just to avoid 
talking bad about the film and still talk about it.

my thoughts:

1. Abhishek's US life and background should have been shown for starting 
10 mins or so, highlighting his love for dadi, and dadi keeping on 
comparing that life and telling him about India.

2. Rishi Kapoor's portion should have been increased by some 15 mins, in 
which he remembers and may be, recounts to Abhishek, the entire duration 
of his affair with Abhishek's mom, and then Abhishek dad dropping in (25 
years ago) and taking her away. This could have been on another young 
trio - two heros, heroine.

3. Genda phool should have been shifted to after fixing the marriage of 
sonam, so that ladies of the family sing it in preparation of the 
forthcoming marriage.

4. either more script was to devoted to development of love between 
abhishek and sonam, or their being in love should have been avoided all 
together. They remain friend and Abhi helps her in achieving her dream 
while all family and neighbors doubt their relation.

5. ending could be something like - Abhishek takes Sonam to Bombay for 
participating in indian idol - by plane so they reach within hour and 
that's the day of the final so they reach stage soon. family and 
neighbors think that they had eloped and that raises communal tension 
and both hindus/ muslims neighbors capture Waheeda and torture her 
holding her repsonsible for bringing abhishek here, so that she reaches 
on the verge of death equally because of hurt and shock and anger as 
well as because of pain and some bleeding. Rishi Kapur dies trying to 
protect Waheeda.

In the mean time, sonam's matrimonial breaks back home due to news of 
her eloping away while the real reason is dowry demand that sonam's dad 
can't fulfil. then Sonam wins indian idol (another new song of our man, 
he he he, he he he, he he he) and every one back home is happy, even 
muslims, and start relating to her. But reporters carry the information 
about the tension their running away had caused back home there and ask 
inconvenient questions. abhishek declares that he is already secretly 
married to his some GF back in US for a few years and he and sonam are 
just friends.

Oh, no. That would kill dil gira dafatan. no, no, no. that has to be 
kept alive and kicking.

okay, dil gira dafatan could have been shifted to between Abhishek's mom 
and the two persons loving her - rishi and Abhishek's hindu father who 
each sing one stanza, instead of the ghazal i recommended above.

Anyway, that cools down all the tempers and communal tension disappears. 
Some established young hindu actor was judge of idol (ranbeer kapur or 
shahid kapur) who becomes interested in Sonam opening the chances of 
future marriage. Waheeda dies. - maybe waheeda's son and daughter in law 
also reach delhi having heard the news of communal tension and Rishi 
kapur dies in front of his lost beloved

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:-) you can tear down the above suggestions. No problemo.

do give ur suggestions about the movie.

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Rawat

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