Excellent point.  My brain's English parsing subroutine stopped when it got to 
the first error so I didn't catch any subsequent ones.

Thanks,

Shawn Pierson
Remedy Developer | Energy Transfer

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[mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Peter Romain
Sent: Friday, July 17, 2015 8:32 AM
To: [email protected]
Subject: Re: Reconciliation Logging Typo

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I'd also be critical of the incorrect past participle, the lack of the 'the' 
before the word 'Identification' and the unnecessary space before the colon in 
the example you gave!

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[mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Pierson, Shawn
Sent: 17 July 2015 13:47
To: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>
Subject: Reconciliation Logging Typo

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This isn't a huge deal so I saved it for a Friday.  I know there are worse 
misspellings of fields and workflow but I'm running through Reconciliation 
stuff and it's a little bit annoying that there is an apostrophe where there 
shouldn't be.  For example, I see this line in a log file:

Total CI's to be process in Identification Activity :

The CIs don't have ownership of anything in that sentence.  My fourth grade 
teacher would not have been happy to see an invalid use of an apostrophe.

Thanks,

Shawn Pierson
Remedy Developer | Energy Transfer
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