Sayli,
I know you din't ask for critique, but I'll provide it just because I feel
like it, and I'm trying to be constructive...and I'm sure that some will
respond to my critique and critique it....but that's the way public forums
are :)

One critique on your resume is the lack of consistent formatting
Typically 'bullets' aren't complete sentences, so don't have a period at
the end of them
Paragraphs are usually indented.

I took the liberty of applying some consistent formatting to your resume to
see if you think it looks 'cleaner' or not :)


On Wed, Jul 30, 2014 at 11:46 AM, Sayli Shah <[email protected]> wrote:

> **
> Hi Rachana,
>
> PFA my revised resume. Refer this one.
>
> Regards,
> Sayli
>
>
> On Wed, Jul 30, 2014 at 10:41 AM, Sayli Shah <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi Rachana,
>>
>> I am interested in California openings.
>> PFA my resume for your reference.
>>
>> Regards,
>> Sayli
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Jul 30, 2014 at 6:45 AM, Rachna Soni <[email protected]>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Hello my Favorite BMC People!
>>>
>>> We are looking for both Sr. Level and Jr. Level BMC consultants!
>>> Opportunities are in California, New York, and Chicago!
>>>
>>> If you or anyone you know are looking for a great company to grow with
>>> contact me ASAP!
>>>
>>> These are all full time, permanent opportunities that offer a
>>> competitive benefits package and salary!
>>>
>>>
>>> I look forward to speaking with you!
>>>
>>> Rachna Soni
>>> Corporate Recruiter
>>> Direct: (630) 541-2040
>>>
>>>
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