On 3/31/06, Ian Darwin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > What we need now are careful proofreading: spelling, grammar, URLs, etc.
Hrmmm... can't seem to cut and paste text in here, so I'll just have to give you the hints... "An open platform" s/prgrammer/programmer "The tip of the iceburg." -- I'd remove the period "Sounds" "What more/better/different sounds files?" -- make 'sounds' singular In the blue router box on the top of page two, I'd change: "SIP FXO/FXS adapter" to something like "SIP to analog (FXO/FXS) adapter" Other than that, I don't see any additional spelling or grammer errors. -- Leif Madsen. http://www.leifmadsen.com http://www.oreilly.com/catalog/asterisk
