On Monday, November 15, 2004, at 10:53 AM, Robert Sayre wrote:
Antone Roundy wrote:

> unless Link Constructs are constrained to
> the point where an application can handle unknown Link Constructs in
> some default way without...how to say it...doing something stupid, it
> doesn't matter whether the application can recognize unknown Link
> Constructs or not.

Here's a first try:

3.5
A Link construct is an empty element that describes a connection from an Atom document to another Web resource. When a link is activated, User Agents are expected to visit the linked resource, rather than apply metadata such as schema or styling information as is common in HTML dialects.


Two possible changes--both minor nit-picks:

1) Change "Atom document" to "Atom feed or entry"?

2) Change "Web resource" to "internet resource"?

It may be possible to make the language prettier in some way, but honestly, I think it's entirely sufficient as it stands. Do you want to make a Pace of it, or shall I?



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