A couple of comments...

Section 6

   Archive documents are feed documents that contain less recent entries
   in the feed.  The set of entries contained in an archive document
   published at a particular URI MUST NOT change over time.

I definitely understand the motivation for the "MUST NOT" here, but I'm
not sure if it's enforceable.  For instance, on my blog, I may go back
and delete an old entry that appears within an archive feed.  Such a
change should be reflected in the archive feed.  I would recommend
changing this to a "SHOULD NOT" with a comment that removing entries
from an archive document has a negative impact on the cacheability of
the document and the effectiveness of the archive.


Section 6.1

The archive document examples do not have the <fh:archive /> element



Mark Nottingham wrote:
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> As discussed earlier.
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>>     Title        : Extensions for Multi-Document Syndicated Feeds
>>     Author(s)    : M. Nottingham
>>     Filename    : draft-nottingham-atompub-feed-history-06.txt
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>>     Date        : 2006-6-28
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>> This specification defines three types of syndicated feeds that
>>    enable publication of entries across one or more feed documents.
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