Update of /cvsroot/audacity/htdocs/about
In directory sc8-pr-cvs11.sourceforge.net:/tmp/cvs-serv1671

Modified Files:
        license.php 
Log Message:
Gale's suggestions:
   Generalize request to include documentation, 
   Fix typo.

Index: license.php
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RCS file: /cvsroot/audacity/htdocs/about/license.php,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -d -r1.6 -r1.7
--- license.php 22 May 2007 21:47:31 -0000      1.6
+++ license.php 14 Jun 2007 01:14:38 -0000      1.7
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 
 <p>We would appreciate your linking to our website: <a 
href="http://audacity.sourceforge.net";>http://audacity.sourceforge.net</a> so 
your users can download updated versions of Audacity when released. Also, 
please subscribe to the notifications list at the bottom of <a 
href="http://audacity.sourceforge.net";>http://audacity.sourceforge.net</a> to 
ensure you are notified of and can distribute the latest version of 
Audacity.</p>
 
-<p>If the distribution is on CD we would also appreciate it if you put the 
Audacity documentation from <a 
href="http://audacity.sourceforge.net/help/documentation";>http://audacity.sourceforge.net/help/documentation</a>
 on the CD to reduce the number of queries we receive, and make it clear in 
your documentation that we (the Audacity Team) cannot offer support on your own 
your product, only on Audacity. </p>
+<p>If possible, please include the Audacity documentation from <a 
href="http://audacity.sourceforge.net/help/documentation";>http://audacity.sourceforge.net/help/documentation</a>
 with your distribution, to reduce the number of queries we receive. Also, 
please make it clear in your documentation that the Audacity Team cannot offer 
support on your own your product, only on Audacity. </p>
 
 <p>IMPORTANT: If you write your own documentation on Audacity, please let us 
review it for possible errors, <em>before</em> you publish it.</p>
    
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@
     <h4>For vendors who wish to resell or distribute Audacity:</h4>
   </dd></dl>
   <ol>
-    <li>If you are reselling Audacity unmodified, your advertising should make 
it clear that Audacity is available for free on the Internet, and make it clear 
what the customer is paying for when they purchase Audacity from you.  
Possiblilties include the convenience of Audacity on CD-ROM, other bundled 
software or music files, a printed manual, or more.</li>
-    <li>If you are distributing Audacity unmodified, we expect you to provide 
your own technical support wherever possible in support of your own customers. 
If you have any concerns or we can help you in this, please contact us.</li>
+    <li>If you are reselling Audacity unmodified, your advertising should make 
it clear that Audacity is available for free on the Internet, and make it clear 
what the customer is paying for when they purchase Audacity from you.  
Possibilities include the convenience of Audacity on CD-ROM, other bundled 
software or music files, a printed manual, or more.</li>
+    <li>If you are reselling Audacity unmodified, we expect you to provide 
your own technical support wherever possible, in support of your own customers. 
If you have any concerns or we can help you in this, please contact us.</li>
     <li>You may not advertise your business as an authorized distributor of 
Audacity.  The name Audacity is a registered trademark of Dominic Mazzoni.</li>
   </ol>
 </p>


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