Update of /cvsroot/audacity/htdocs/about
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Modified Files:
license.php
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updates per Gale's suggestions
Index: license.php
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RCS file: /cvsroot/audacity/htdocs/about/license.php,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -d -r1.9 -r1.10
--- license.php 16 Jul 2007 23:42:54 -0000 1.9
+++ license.php 17 Jul 2007 00:30:59 -0000 1.10
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
echo _('<h3>Advice for Vendors and Distributors</h3>
-<p>Several third parties bundle Audacity with their products, resell, or
distribute Audacity (see <a href="../download/bundlers">Vendors that Distribute
Audacity</a>). Here are guidelines for bundling, reselling, or distributing
Audacity. If you adhere to these guidelines, please <a
href="../contact/">contact us</a> for possible inclusion at <a
href="../download/bundlers">Vendors that Distribute Audacity</a> (per
instructions there).</p>
+<p>Several third parties bundle Audacity with their products, resell, or
distribute Audacity (see <a href="../download/bundlers">Vendors that Distribute
Audacity</a>). Here are guidelines for bundling, reselling, or distributing
Audacity. If you adhere to these guidelines, please <a
href="../contact/">contact us</a> for possible inclusion at <a
href="../download/bundlers">Vendors and Distributors of Audacity</a> (per
instructions there).</p>
<p>You must include, in accordance with Section 3 of the GPL:
<ol>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
<p>
<dl><dt></dt><dd><!-- indent cheat -->
- <h4>For vendors who wish to resell or distribute Audacity:</h4>
+ <h4>For those who wish to resell or distribute Audacity:</h4>
</dd></dl>
<ol>
<li>If you are reselling Audacity unmodified, your advertising should make
it clear that Audacity is available for free on the Internet, and make it clear
what the customer is paying for when they purchase Audacity from you.
Possibilities include the convenience of Audacity on CD-ROM, other bundled
software or music files, a printed manual, or more.</li>
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