Hi Sandy, Thanks for your work on this. I also checked and, like Brian, have not received the original mail. I have read the latest version and it looks good. Consider my approval complete.
Regards Suresh On Fri, Jun 27, 2025 at 12:00 PM Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Hi Brian, > > Thank you for your review. We have updated the document as described > below and posted the updated files here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9812.xml > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9812.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9812.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9812.html > > AUTH48 diffs: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9812-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9812-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by > side) > > Comprehensive diffs: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9812-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9812-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > > A few notes: > > - We are unsure why the initial AUTH48 email was not received. Thank you > for letting us know; we will track whether there are ongoing issues. > > - Regarding your name, if you prefer "B. E. Carpenter”, we are happy to > update this document and this form moving forward. Please let us know your > preference. > > - Regarding "I assume the IANA and RFC Editor actions will be done just > before the actual publication.” — IANA has already updated the registration > procedure. We are working with IANA in the background to coordinate the > updates to the registry titles. I expect you prefer to delay publication > of this RFC until the titles have been updated so the document can be > updated accordingly. Please let me know if this assumption is incorrect. > > Thanks, > RFC Editor/sg > > > > On Jun 26, 2025, at 2:02 PM, Brian E Carpenter < > brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > I have read the various versions and checked the diffs, and for me this > is all good. > > (I assume the IANA and RFC Editor actions will be done just before the > actual publication.) > > > > Other answers in line below. > > > > Thanks much > > Brian Carpenter > > > > On 27-Jun-25 06:21, Sandy Ginoza wrote: > >> Greetings authors, > >> Please note that we await your review of RFC-to-be 9812. Please let us > know how you would like to address the items below. > >> Thank you, > >> RFC Editor/sg > >>> On Jun 18, 2025, at 4:38 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote: > >>> > >>> Authors, > >>> > >>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) > >>> the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >>> > >>> 1) <!--[rfced] This document has been assigned a new BCP number. > However, > >>> it is unclear whether this document should be grouped with an existing > BCP. > >>> Please review the list of BCPs closely and let us know if the newly > >>> assigned BCP number is correct or if it should be added to an existing > BCP. > >>> > >>> See the complete list of BCPs here: > >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/bcps > >>> --> > > > > There is a slight relationship with BCP 153 but I think a new BCP number > > is appropriate. > > > >>> > >>> > >>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Brian, we have updated the document header as shown > below > >>> to match what appears in the header of the RFCs you've authored. > Please > >>> let us know if you prefer otherwise. > >>> > >>> Original: B. E. Carpenter > >>> Current: B. Carpenter > >>> --> > > > > That's fine. A bit too late to change this. > > > >>> > >>> > >>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > >>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Regarding the RFC Editor Considerations section, we > would > >>> like to avoid setting precedent that stream changes need to be > documented > >>> in RFCs. We intend to update the stream metadata for RFC 1881 as > requested > >>> (from "Legacy" to "IETF") and remove 'RFC Editor Considerations' > (Section > >>> 3) from this document, as it's not necessary to capture the metadata > >>> correction within the RFC. Please let us know if you have any strong > >>> objections. > > > > No objection from me. It's the result that counts. > > > >>> > >>> 3. 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Carpenter, S. Krishnan, D. Farmer > >>> WG Chair(s) : Bob Hinden, Jen Linkova > >>> > >>> Area Director(s) : Erik Kline, Éric Vyncke > >>> > >>> > >
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