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Thank you, Alanna Paloma RFC Production Center > On Sep 2, 2025, at 10:44 PM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Hi Alanna, > > Thank you for preparing this updated version. I have some few comments: > > * Please expand AC in the introduction: > > OLD: > The procedure to provision a service in a service provider network > may depend on the practices adopted by a service provider, including > the flow put in place for the provisioning of advanced network > services and how they are bound to an AC. > > NEW: > The procedure to provision a service in a service provider network > may depend on the practices adopted by a service provider, including > the flow put in place for the provisioning of advanced network > services and how they are bound to an attachment circuit (AC). > > * fix a naming bug in Figure 1 as we have two "CE5"! > > OLD: > .--. > |CE6| > '-+' > ac | .--. .--. > | |CE5+------+------+CE2| > .-----+-----. '--' | '--' > | | |ac > | | | > .+. .+. .+. > .-+sap+-------+sap+-. .-+sap+-------------. > | '-' '-' | | '-' | > | PE1 | | PE2 | > .--. .+. | | | > |CE1+--+sap| | | | > '--' ac '+' | | | > '-------------------' '-------------------' > > .-------------------. .-------------------. > | | | .+. ac .--. > | PE3 | | PE4 |sap+--+CE5| > | | | '-' '--' > | | | | > | .-. | | .-. .-. .-. | > '-------------+sap+-' '-+sap+-+sap+-+sap+-' > '+' '+' '+' '+' > |ac | |ac |ac > .+-. | .+-. | > |CE3+-----ac-----' |CE4+---' > '--' '--' > > NEW: > .--. > |CE6| > '-+' > ac | .--. .--. > | |CE5+------+------+CE2| > .-----+-----. '--' | '--' > | | |ac > | | | > .+. .+. .+. > .-+sap+-------+sap+-. .-+sap+-------------. > | '-' '-' | | '-' | > | PE1 | | PE2 | > .--. .+. | | | > |CE1+--+sap| | | | > '--' ac '+' | | | > '-------------------' '-------------------' > > .-------------------. .-------------------. > | | | .+. ac .--. > | PE3 | | PE4 |sap+--+CE7| > | | | '-' '--' > | | | | > | .-. | | .-. .-. .-. | > '-------------+sap+-' '-+sap+-+sap+-+sap+-' > '+' '+' '+' '+' > |ac | |ac |ac > .+-. | .+-. | > |CE3+-----ac-----' |CE4+---' > '--' '--' > > * For consistency with other documents in the cluster, change "parent AC" to > "Parent AC" and "child AC" to "Child AC" > > Assuming these changes are made, I approve the publication of the document. > > Thank you. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> Envoyé : mercredi 3 septembre 2025 00:18 >> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> >> Cc : rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; rrobe...@juniper.net; >> oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com; >> samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; lana.w...@huawei.com; opsawg- >> a...@ietf.org; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org; kszarkow...@juniper.net; >> mjethanand...@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9835 <draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw- >> attachment-circuit-16> for your review >> >> >> Hi Med, >> >> Thank you for your reply. 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mentions >>> >>> CURRENT: >>> LxSM refers to both the Layer 2 Service Model (L2SM) [RFC8466] >> and >>> the Layer 3 Service Model (L3SM) [RFC8299]. >>> >>> NEW >>> LxSM refers to both the L2VPN Service Model (L2SM) [RFC8466] >> and >>> the L3VPN Service Model (L3SM) [RFC8299]. >>> >>> * Section 2: Please revert to the original as PE was not >> expanded yet >>> >>> CURRENT: the PE selection >>> NEW: the Provider Edge (PE) selection >>> >>> * Section 2: fix a reference >>> >>> OLD: >>> | ac-svc | ietf-ac-svc | Section 5.2 of [RFC9834] | >>> >>> NEW: >>> | ac-svc | ietf-ac-svc | Section 6.2 of [RFC9834] | >>> >>> * Section 7 >>> >>> I prefer the order in the original text as the para that was >> moved >>> falls under the "reusable" types from other modules covered in >> this >>> section: >>> >> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> wiki >>> .ietf.org%2Fgroup%2Fops%2Fyang-security-guidelines%23reusable- >> grouping >>> s-from-other-modules- >> section&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange >>> >> .com%7C9afbeb0e86144af1bc2008ddea6e9eda%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b925 >> 3b6f >>> >> 5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638924483290446517%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0 >> eU1h >>> >> cGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIl >> dUIj >>> >> oyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=D%2B5KaIp9C1HRxsZ9UdD0lnDCONdvixBqei >> Wkw% >>> 2Bwt5UY%3D&reserved=0 >>> >>> * Please revert to the OLD version and move RFC4252, RFC6241, >> RFC8040, >>> RFC8446, RFC9000 to be listed as Informative References. These >> are >>> provided as examples. FWIW, please refer to the note at >>> >> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> wiki >>> .ietf.org%2Fgroup%2Fops%2Fyang-security- >> guidelines&data=05%7C02%7Cmoha >>> >> med.boucadair%40orange.com%7C9afbeb0e86144af1bc2008ddea6e9eda%7C90 >> c7a2 >>> >> 0af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638924483290462328%7CUnknown% >> 7CTW >>> >> FpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4z >> MiIs >>> >> IkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=n%2FO8x3TjQ09w >> 2Gzg >>> tcRlT2XXB8BeOd70xOI3TdnCIG0%3D&reserved=0 >>> >>> Thank you. >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Med >>> >>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>> De : rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> >> Envoyé : >>>> mardi 12 août 2025 07:49 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >>>> <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; rrobe...@juniper.net; >>>> oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com; >>>> samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; lana.w...@huawei.com Cc : >>>> rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; opsawg-...@ietf.org; opsawg- >>>> cha...@ietf.org; kszarkow...@juniper.net; >> mjethanand...@gmail.com; >>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Objet : AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9835 >>>> <draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment- >>>> circuit-16> for your review >>>> >>>> *****IMPORTANT***** >>>> >>>> Updated 2025/08/11 >>>> >>>> RFC Author(s): >>>> -------------- >>>> >>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >>>> >>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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