Jérôme, This is a reminder that we await word from you regarding this document. FYI, Section 1.1, 2nd paragraph has been updated further using text sent by A. Clemm, Ed.
Recommended diff (which shows all changes from the approved I-D): https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html Alice Russo RFC Production Center > On Sep 6, 2025, at 1:31 PM, Alice Russo <[email protected]> wrote: > > Jérôme, > > As document shepherd, please review the edited document and let us know if > you approve it or any updates are needed. Re: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html > (which shows all changes from the approved I-D), please review the following > changes, at minimum. Here, "S" stands for "Section". > > - S1.1 2nd paragraph, added text starting with 'When we say'. > - S1.1 last paragraph, rephrased. > - S3 last paragraph, rephrased. > - S5.4, added text starting with 'Memory as well as'. > - S6.1 2nd paragraph, rephrased. > > Thank you. > > Alice Russo > RFC Production Center > > I wrote: >> Carlos, >> >> Thank you for your reply. The revised files are here (please refresh): >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.xml >> >> This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-diff.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html (side by side) >> >> This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48diff.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) >> >> This diff file shows only the changes since the last posted version: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-lastrfcdiff.html >> >> In addition to the changes you requested: >> - removed extraneous 'to'. >> - lowercased 'fluorinated'. >> - replaced angled quotes with straight quotes per RFC style. >> >> Re: >>> After fixing these three nits, please note and write down my Approval of >>> the document at https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9845 >> >> Your approval has been recorded. We await word from your coauthors >> and the Document Shepherd before continuing the publication process. >> >> Thank you. >> RFC Editor/ar -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
