Hi,

We need to publish a new version that includes recent changes,
unfortunately we can't do that so close to the plenary week.

Inline:

On Tue, Oct 28, 2025 at 4:10 PM Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]>
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> 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during
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Yes, although it is a bit wordy.


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Yes.


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We have CBOR Extended Diagnostic Notation examples and JSON examples, here
are the relevant RFCs &  drafts:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7517
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8610#appendix-G
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cbor-edn-literals/

We also have CDDL in Section 4 based on
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8610



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We use `value` to highlight CBOR labels, and other example values in the
text.


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We have restated the "detached payload" language originating from
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8152#section-2
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8152#section-4.1

I think we may have lost some opportunities for clarity in our repetition.


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This document is really just new header parameters for cose sign 1 payloads
that are the output of a hash function.


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We only use ` ... I suspect we might be better off using " for a few values
instead of `, and reserve ` for highlighting code points and not examples.


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Yes.


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We did not manage the draft in xml, but the proper source code type for
CDDL is: <sourcecode type="cddl" ...

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Yes please!


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