Hi Authors,

This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the followup 
questions/comments below for RFC-to-be 9880. 

Thank you, and happy IETF week!

Madison Church
RFC Production Center

> On Oct 27, 2025, at 2:24 PM, Madison Church <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Carsten,
> 
> Note that we have added IANA to this thread.
> 
> After further discussion with IANA regarding questions 11 and 14, we have 
> removed the relative links because they are not permanent. We have reverted 
> the text, so the registry titles appear in quotes (i.e., “SenML Units” and 
> “Secondary Units”) as shown in the updated files. Please let us know if there 
> are any additional textual updates needed.
> 
> Updated files:
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880.txt
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880.pdf
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880.xml
> 
> Updated diff files:
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-auth48diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
> AUTH48 status page: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9880
> 
> Thank you,
> Madison Church
> RFC Production Center
> 
>> On Oct 27, 2025, at 6:42 AM, Madison Church <[email protected]> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Carsten,
>> 
>> Thank you for your reply, and apologies for the delayed response! We have 
>> updated the document accordingly. Please see below for followup 
>> questions/comments. Note that we have left outstanding items in this thread 
>> for convenience (and removed questions that have been resolved).
>> 
>>> On Oct 10, 2025, at 3:02 PM, Carsten Bormann <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> RFC-editor,
>>> 
>>> thank you for preparing this RFC-to-be.
>>> 
>>> We’ll first reply to the more specific ones of your questions below.
>>> We will respond to more general questions (that require us to scan the 
>>> document) in the next round (marked here with TO CHECK in questions 6, 20, 
>>> 21, 22, 23).
>>> 
>>> Please note that we are also preparing a -25, with two typo/C&P fixes and 
>>> one more technical omission fixed (PR #187 to #189 in 
>>> https://github.com/ietf-wg-asdf/SDF/pulls).
>>> We previously prepared a -24 with PR #186 in it (technical omissions), 
>>> which you already picked up.
>>> You probably need AD approval for all these.
>> 
>> 1) Thank you for letting us know! We incorporated these edits into the 
>> document and also sent a reminder (on October 23) for the AD(s) to review 
>> these updates. These updates may be best viewed side-by-side in this diff 
>> file: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-auth48rfcdiff.html. Please 
>> review the files carefully and let us know if they appear as desired.
>> 
>>> Grüße, Carsten
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On 2025-10-07, at 07:03, [email protected] wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Authors,
>>>> 
>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
>>>> the following questions, which are also in the source file.
>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Figure 2: The SVG includes additional information that is 
>>>> not present in the text.  Is this as expected?  For example, we see 0+, 1, 
>>>> and (c) in the SVG but not in the text artwork. In addition, sdfEvent and 
>>>> sdfAction appear in a different order.  Please review. 
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> We originally had completely given up on providing a plaintext form of the 
>>> illustration.
>>> The plaintext illustration that now is in there is somewhat rudimentary.
>>> As you notice, it doesn’t have the occurrence labels (0+, 1), and it 
>>> doesn’t mark the boxes as compositions which looks almost like a © symbol 
>>> in the generated SVG.
>>> 
>>> We do warn that this is a limited rendition, so we think we are good.
>> 
>> 2) Thank you for the explanation! We also note that pointing to the HTML in 
>> the text (and removing the ASCII art) is also an option to avoid mismatching 
>> figures; see https://authors.ietf.org/en/diagrams. Let us know if you prefer 
>> to keep the text/figure as is, or if you would like to update the document. 
>> For example, Figure 1 in RFC 9633 
>> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9633.txt) shows how this would appear in 
>> the text output.
>> 
>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this document
>>>> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for 
>>>> content that is semantically less important or tangential to the 
>>>> content that surrounds it" 
>>>> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [TO CHECK]
>>> 
>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] May we rephrase the text below as follows to improve 
>>>> readability and specify "it" in the second sentence?
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> The keyword (map key) that defines an information block is "info".
>>>> Its value is a JSON map in turn, with a set of entries that represent
>>>> qualities that apply to the included definition.
>>>> 
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>> The keyword (map key) that defines an information block as "info".
>>> 
>>> This should stay “is” — not a sentence otherwise.
>>> (This is a statement about the keyword, giving its name as “info”.)
>>> 
>>>> In turn, the keyword's value is a JSON map with a set of entries that 
>>>> represent
>>>> qualities that apply to the included definition.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> We could also make use of the word “nested”:
>>> 
>>>> The keyword's value is nested a JSON map with a set of entries that 
>>>> represent
>>>> qualities that apply to the included definition.
>>> 
>>> In any case, we need to change
>>> OLD:
>>> included definition
>>> NEW:
>>> included definitions
>>> 
>>> … to mirror the first paragraph of 3.1.
>> 
>> 3) Thank you for your proposal! We agree with the suggested text and updated 
>> the sentence with a minor correction to the placement of "nested a". The 
>> sentence now reads as: "The keyword’s value is a nested JSON map…". Please 
>> let us know if this is correct.
>> 
>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] FYI - In the XML, we have removed the links from "SenML 
>>>> Units" and "Secondary Units" since those links do not point to the correct
>>>> section (and the correct section pointers follow shortly
>>>> thereafter). Please let us know any objections.
>>> 
>>> I’m not happy with not having those fragment identifiers as links.
>>> I understand that IANA wants to keep the ability to change their format, 
>>> but that has been outstanding for a long time now.
>>> The worst that can happen is that the fragment identifier part of the link 
>>> does not work and the link points to the file as a whole.
>>> 
>>>> Original XML:
>>>>       <t>The unit name <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> be as                         
>>>>           
>>>> per the <xref section="SenML Units" relative="#senml-units" 
>>>> sectionFormat="bare"           
>>>> target="RFC8428"/> registry                                                
>>>>                 
>>>> or the <xref section="Secondary Units" relative="#secondary-units" 
>>>> sectionFormat="bare"    
>>>> target="RFC8798"/> registry in <xref target="IANA.senml"/>                 
>>>>                 
>>>> as specified by                                                            
>>>>                 
>>>> Sections <xref target="RFC8428" section="4.5.1" sectionFormat="bare"/> and 
>>>> <xref           
>>>> target="RFC8428" section="12.1" sectionFormat="bare"/> of <xref 
>>>> target="RFC8428"/> and     
>>>> <xref section="3" sectionFormat="of" target="RFC8798"/>, respectively.  
>>>> </t>
>>>> -->
>> 
>> 4) Understood. We have restored the links for the fragment identifiers. To 
>> clarify, these links refer to RFCs 8428 (for SenML Units) and 8798 (for 
>> Secondary Units) rather than the IANA registries themselves 
>> (<https://www.iana.org/assignments/senml/senml.xhtml#senml-units> and 
>> <https://www.iana.org/assignments/senml/senml.xhtml#secondary-units>). Is 
>> this intentional? We ask this because the in-text citations that follow the 
>> fragment identifier links reference the specific sections of the RFCs that 
>> these registries appear in (so both RFCs are essentially referenced twice in 
>> the same sentence).
>> 
>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] The IANA registry includes "(note 1)" as part of the 
>>>> description for unix-time, but there is no note included in the registry.  
>>>> Should the notes be included in the registry
>>> 
>>> Yes, please.
>> 
>> 5) We will ask IANA to update to include this note.
>> 
>>>> or perhaps "(note 1)" should 
>>>> be removed from the description? 
>>>> 
>>>> Original (text):
>>>> | unix-time   | A point in  | number | POSIX time     | Section    |
>>>> |             | civil time  |        |                | 3.4.2 of   |
>>>> |             | (note 1)    |        |                | RFC 8949   |
>>>> |             |             |        |                | [STD94]    |
>>>> 
>>>> See the IANA registry:
>>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/sdf/sdf.xhtml#sdftype-values
>>>> -->
>> 
>>>> 14) <!-- [rfced] We have updated this text to remove the use of relative 
>>>> references.  Please review. 
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> Repository:  combining the symbol values from the SenML Units
>>>>  registry and the Secondary Units registry in [IANA.senml] as
>>>>  specified by Sections 4.5.1 and 12.1 of [RFC8428] and Section 3 of
>>>>  [RFC8798], respectively (which by the registration policy are
>>>>  guaranteed to be non-overlapping).
>>>> 
>>>> Current:
>>>> Repository:  Combining the symbol values from the "SenML Units"
>>>>  registry and the "Secondary Units" registry in the "Sensor
>>>>  Measurement Lists (SenML)" registry group [IANA.senml] as
>>>>  specified by Sections 4.5.2 and 12.1 of [RFC8428] and Section 3 of
>>>>  [RFC8798], respectively (which, by the registration policy, are
>>>>  guaranteed to be non-overlapping).
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>> 
>>> (I can’t see the change in the plaintext here…)
>>> Please see my comment about relative references into IANA registries above 
>>> in question 11.
>> 
>> 6) Noted. Relative references have also been restored in this sentence. 
>> Please see our response/followup question to question 11.
>> 
>>>> 17) <!-- [rfced] References
>>>> 
>>>> a) Please review the following reference.  The original URL for this 
>>>> reference - 
>>>> http://www.openmobilealliance.org/wp/omna/lwm2m/lwm2mregistry.html -
>>>> redirects to the following URL:
>>>> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/specifications with the title "OMA
>>>> Specifications".
>>>> 
>>>> We could not find a page with the original title for this reference "OMA
>>>> LightweightM2M (LwM2M) Object and Resource Registry". We did find the
>>>> following page: 
>>>> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/specifications/registries, which 
>>>> contains separate links to the LwM2M Objects and 
>>>> Resources registries.
>>>> 
>>>> Would you like to update this reference to point to this new URL? 
>>>> 
>>>> Current:
>>>> [OMA]      Open Mobile Alliance, "OMA LightweightM2M (LwM2M) Object
>>>>          and Resource Registry",
>>>>          <http://www.openmobilealliance.org/wp/omna/lwm2m/
>>>>          lwm2mregistry.html>.
>>> 
>>> Right, so the URL and the title would need to be updated.
>>> The actual HTML page title is awkward, though.
>>> 
>>> Title: openmobilealliance.org/specifications/registries/objects/
>>> 
>>> Maybe we can use the <h1> title instead of the document.title (which I 
>>> don’t find in the page source, by the way):
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> Title: LwM2M OBJECTS
>>> Link: https://www.openmobilealliance.org/specifications/registries/objects
>>> 
>>> This link is slightly more specific than what we referenced before, but 
>>> fits the site of the citation (which is about objects, not about resources) 
>>> even better.
>>> 
>>> (With my browser, the page briefly indicates that it is embarrassed about 
>>> itself and then switches back to what we want here; this may need some 
>>> additional debugging.)
>>> 
>>>> b) The information for this reference appears to be from the 2020 version 
>>>> of ECMA Standard ECMA-262. However, the URL provided points to the 2024 
>>>> edition.
>>>> 
>>>> We've updated this reference to use the information from the URL - that is,
>>>> the 2024 edition. Please let us know if you have any objections.  
>>>> 
>>>> Current:
>>>> [ECMA-262] Ecma International, "ECMAScript 2024 Language
>>>>          Specification", 15th Edition, ECMA Standard ECMA-262, June
>>>>          2024, <https://www.ecma-international.org/wp-
>>>>          content/uploads/ECMA-262.pdf>.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> By now, that would be 
>>> title: ECMA-262, 16th edition, June 2025
>>> link: 
>>> https://ecma-international.org/wp-content/uploads/ECMA-262_16th_edition_june_2025.pdf
>>> 
>>> Of course, the intention is not to point just to this specific revision.
>>> I don’t think we have a general guideline how to deal with documents that 
>>> are on a regular update schedule, so simply going to the 2025 revision 
>>> might be the right thing to do.
>>> 
>>> (This is based on the belief that the new functionality in 16th edition 
>>> relative to 11th edition does not extend the pattern language resulting 
>>> from applying the suggested limitations in Appendix C.2 to the referenced 
>>> edition.  Updating these links does need some care…)
>> 
>> 7) Both references have been updated. Please review the updated files and 
>> let us know if they appear as desired.
>> 
>>>> 19) <!-- [rfced] Does "earlier drafts" refer to earlier drafts of the I-D 
>>>> that became this RFC or earlier versions of SDF (defined elsewhere)?  
>>>> Perhaps this can be clarified?
>>>> 
>>>> Current: 
>>>> Appendix E. Some Changes From Earlier Drafts 
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> The first (real) paragraph of Appendix E is actually intended to clarify 
>>> this.
>>> To answer the question: All the published draft specs have been 
>>> Internet-Drafts, see timeline on
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-asdf-sdf/
>>> 
>>> “Earlier drafts” of course is a bit confusing as the RFC-to-be no longer is 
>>> a draft.
>>> Maybe “from drafts of this specification”?
>> 
>> 8) We have updated the title of Appendix E as follows. Additionally, would 
>> the following update clarify "previous revisions of SDF"?
>> 
>> Current (Title of Appendix E): Some Changes from Earlier Draft Versions of 
>> this Specification
>> 
>> Current (Text in Appendix E):
>> Previous revisions of SDF have been in use for several years, and both
>> significant collections of older SDF models and older SDF conversion
>> tools are available today.
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>> SDF, as defined in earlier drafts versions of this specification, have been 
>> in use 
>> for several years; both significant collections of older SDF models and 
>> older SDF 
>> conversion tools are available today.
>> 
>>>> 20) <!-- [rfced] Please review each artwork element and let us know if any 
>>>> should be marked as sourcecode (or another element) instead.
>>>> 
>>>> We updated Figure 5 from artwork to sourcecode. Please confirm that this is
>>>> correct.
>>> 
>>> When does a snippet (like the one about warning/danger in 2.3.2, which is 
>>> marked as artwork) become sourcecode?
>>> Figure 5 is not really parsable per se, it needs to be integrated into 
>>> context to *really* be sourcecode.
>>> Despite this, marking it as JSON sourcecode probably is OK (even if 
>>> kramdown-rfc would complain that it isn’t really JSON, because it is a 
>>> snippet, or actually two of them in one figure).
>>> 
>>>> In addition, please consider whether the "type" attribute of any sourcecode
>>>> element should be set and/or has been set correctly.
>>> 
>>> [TO CHECK]
>>> 
>>>> The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at
>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types>.
>>>> If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to
>>>> suggest additions for consideration. Note that it is also acceptable
>>>> to leave the "type" attribute not set.
>>> 
>>> We haven’t really discussed so far whether there should be a sourcecode 
>>> type specifically for SDF.
>>> By default, application/sdf+json is one (usually leaving out application/, 
>>> so just “sdf+json”).
>>> We do have precedent for using structured syntax suffixes in 
>>> yang-instance-data+json, so nothing appears to speak against use that.
>>> (There are 25 instances where this needs to be checked.)
>>> 
>>>> -->
>>>> 21) <!-- [rfced] We note that these terms appear both with and without 
>>>> <tt> 
>>>> tags.  Please review each instance of the terms below and ensure that they 
>>>> appear in the document as desired. If these terms should be formatted 
>>>> consistently or follow a specific pattern, please let us know.  
>>> 
>>> [TO CHECK]
>>> 
>>> Generally, when the sourcecode construct is meant, we use the typewriter 
>>> font; when the concept is meant (“an array of string values”…), we don’t, 
>>> and we then use the English capitalization (“Boolean”).
>>> 
>>>> <tt>absolute-URI</tt>
>>>> <tt>array</tt>
>>>> <tt>boolean</tt>
>>>> <tt>curie</tt>
>>>> <tt>date-time</tt> (also appears in quotes)
>>>> <tt>defaultNamespace</tt>
>>>> <tt>description</tt>
>>>> <tt>enum</tt>
>>>> <tt>false</tt>
>>>> <tt>features</tt> (also appears in quotes)
>>>> <tt>format</tt>
>>>> <tt>info</tt>
>>>> <tt>integer</tt>
>>>> <tt>items</tt>
>>>> <tt>json-schema.org</tt>
>>>> <tt>label</tt>
>>>> <tt>length</tt>
>>>> <tt>named-sdq</tt>
>>>> <tt>namespace</tt>
>>>> <tt>null</tt>
>>>> <tt>number</tt>
>>>> <tt>object</tt> (also appears in quotes)
>>>> <tt>pattern</tt> (also appears in quotes)
>>>> <tt>properties</tt> (also appears in quotes)
>>>> <tt>referenceable-name</tt> (also appears in quotes)   
>>>> <tt>required</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfAction</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfChoice</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfData</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfEvent</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfObject</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfOutputData</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfProperty</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfRef</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfRequired</tt> (also appears in quotes)
>>>> <tt>sdfThing</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdf</tt>
>>>> <tt>sdfType</tt>
>>>> <tt>string</tt>
>>>> <tt>toggle</tt> (also appears in quotes)
>>>> <tt>true</tt>
>>>> <tt>type</tt>
>>>> <tt>unit(s)</tt>
>>>> <tt>value</tt>
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 22) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following terms and let us know if/how 
>>>> we should update for consistency.
>>>> 
>>>> a) Capitalization
>>> 
>>> Continue here later… [TO CHECK]
>>> 
>>>> Properties vs. properties
>>>> quality names vs. Quality Names
>>>> SDF model vs. SDF Model
>>>> 
>>>> b) Spacing
>>>> data qualities vs. dataqualities
>>>> data quality vs. data quality
>>> 
>>> ?
>> 
>> 9) Apologies for the confusion. Here is the correct side-by-side comparison:
>> data quality vs. dataquality
>> 
>>>> c) Other
>>>> base SDF vs. SDF base
>>>> -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 23) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for abbreviations upon 
>>>> first use per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review 
>>>> each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> We’ll get to this in the diff reading phase.
>>> [TO CHECK]
>> 
>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880.pdf
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880.xml
>> 
>> Diff files:
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-diff.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-auth48diff.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9880-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>> 
>> For the AUTH48 status page, see: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9880. 
>> 
>> Thank you!
>> 
>> Madison Church
>> RFC Production Center
>> 
>>>> Thank you.
>>> 
>>> Thank you!
>>> 
>>>> Madison Church and Sandy Ginoza 
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> On Oct 6, 2025, at 9:57 PM, [email protected] wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>> 
>>>> Updated 2025/10/06
>>>> 
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>>>> 
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>>>> 
>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>> RFC 9880 (draft-ietf-asdf-sdf-24)
>>>> 
>>>> Title            : Semantic Definition Format (SDF) for Data and 
>>>> Interactions of Things
>>>> Author(s)        : M. Koster, Ed., C. Bormann, Ed., A. Keränen
>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Michael Richardson, Lorenzo Corneo
>>>> 
>>>> Area Director(s) : Andy Newton, Orie Steele
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
>> 
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