Eliot, all, Thank you for sending along that updated XML file.
We have a few additional notes and questions regarding this updated file (see below) -- but please feel free to proceed with addressing the previous questions in this email thread as well. a) Since this document has been updated to use line wrapping per RFC 8792, please let us know where to cite RFC 8792 and include a note about line wrapping (see the appendices of RFCs 9891 and 9834 for examples of this). b) The following lines in the updated JSON are too long. Kindly review and update the lines below so that they fit within the 69-character line limit for sourcecode. From A.3: of the CA certificate.”, From A.3: dnsName.”, From A.4: "description": "Identity Resolving Key (IRK), which is unique \ for every device. It is used to resolve a random address. This value \ From A.5: / Device Provisioning Protocol (DPP).”, From A.8: "description": "The 64-bit Extended Unique Identifier (EUI-64) \ c) We note that some of the line wrapping in the updated JSON has inconsistent line breaks, spacing, indentation, etc. Please review and let us know if any updates are needed here or elsewhere. We’ve included a few examples below: Section A.4: A few trailing periods in the “descriptions” Section A.9: A line break before the closing quote in 'EndpointApp\ — FILES (please refresh): — The updated files have been posted here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944.pdf https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944.xml Diff files showing changes made during AUTH48: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-auth48diff.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) Diff files showing all changes: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-diff.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9944-rfcdiff.html (side by side) The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9944 Thank you, Kaelin Foody RFC Production Center > On Mar 15, 2026, at 7:13 AM, Eliot Lear <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Kaelin, > > Please see the attached XML file. I have reflowed the JSON in accordance > with RFC 8792. At the moment, this is the only change. We have others > queued, but since this was a big one. A few notes: > > • I had to do this from my own toolchain. That meant that I went back to > the draft markdown file to do the reflow, using Carsten’s ~~~json feature to > get it right. > • This means that I had to backport the editorial changes you made in the > JSON. I think I got all of them but one, which was “READ-ONLY” => “READ > ONLY”. I believe the original is correct in this case. > • I have repaired the last diagram. However, you may wish to review the > earlier XML file with the tools team, since what we handed you after IESG > approval had since been damaged. > > Could you please do a sanity pass over the attached? If it looks good to > you, we can address the other remaining points. > > Thanks for your efforts. Sorry for the inconvenience.Eliot > >> On 13 Mar 2026, at 17:24, Kaelin Foody <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Hi Eliot, all, >> >> Thanks for your reply. >> >> We will wait to receive those updates from you before proceeding and can >> address the other items afterward. >> >> All the best, >> >> Kaelin Foody >> RFC Production Center >> >>> On Mar 13, 2026, at 7:50 AM, Eliot Lear <[email protected]> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Hello RFC Editor and thanks for your efforts. >>> >>> There are, I think several issues with the draft RFC that we would like to >>> address before going too far. The first is that the last graphic in the >>> text version (Appendix C) seems to have been smushed. In addition, and for >>> this one, I apologize, I think we need to reflow the JSON in accordance >>> with RFC 8792. Can we address that first? >>> >>> Eliot >>> >>>> On 11 Mar 2026, at 19:41, [email protected] wrote: >>>> >>>> Authors, >>>> >>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) >>>> the following questions, which are also in the source file. >>>> >>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been >>>> updated as >>>> follows: >>>> >>>> Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC >>>> Style Guide"). Please review. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> Device Schema Extensions to the SCIM model >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> >>>> Device Schema Extensions to the System for Cross-Domain Identity >>>> Management (SCIM) Model >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in >>>> the title) for use on >>>> https://secure-web.cisco.com/1PPb7iv5yqbTuUJm-V3VX5WNLACWX6bTxg1xViQShhKe4erOXftZkZO31gWpaQ35KyFJ5dlGheldlVukVzD4tVLNPGMpbs7JwcabledoVGPxduQ3gapB0Snpfd7AClpcTlkgxhvhd_VgGZ5DYTDtyyheJoSXU8e9MNuTzgMMKVORG0Egx1seg0tmWEJ0X95er0xCHeVN6dPn3WUceHKZfR1aNRJPl57lIXc3zA-p7s9K9kgQcdgqW_j5o7lRCxLO84rn2KZGlSWABBdGPSm7NFwZXnbVVI6yYRtEWErQhubhjkRfK2k9qbTqF-5EghGec/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fsearch >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] In the text below, we have updated "JSON Schema" to "JSON >>>> Schemas" (plural) >>>> and "OpenAPI" to "OpenAPI versions" (for consistency with the first >>>> sentence). >>>> Please review to confirm these changes are accurate. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> In addition, we provide non-normative JSON Schema [JSONSchema] and OpenAPI >>>> [OpenAPI] versions in the appendices for ease of implementation, neither of >>>> which existed when SCIM was originally developed. The only difference the >>>> authors note between the normative schema representations is that JSON >>>> Schema and OpenAPI do not have a means to express... >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> >>>> In addition, we provide non-normative JSON Schemas [JSONSchema] and OpenAPI >>>> [OpenAPI] versions in the appendices for ease of implementation, neither of >>>> which existed when SCIM was originally developed. The only difference the >>>> authors note between the normative schema representations is that the JSON >>>> Schemas and OpenAPI versions do not have a means to express... >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Could the citations below be updated as follows for >>>> clarity? >>>> We ask because it appears that attribute characteristics are defined >>>> in Section 2.2 of RFC 7643, and that attribute datatypes are defined >>>> in Section 2.3 of RFC 7643. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> Attributes defined in the device core schema and extensions comprise >>>> characteristics and SCIM datatypes defined in Sections 2.2 and 2.3 of >>>> [RFC7643]. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> Attributes defined in the device core schema (see Section 2.2 of >>>> [RFC7643]) and extensions comprise characteristics and the SCIM datatypes >>>> (defined in Section 2.3 of [RFC7643]). >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update the text below as follows? Note >>>> that >>>> this update is similar to text that appears in Appendix A.2. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> For example, when used in conjunction with NIPC [I-D.brinckman-nipc], >>>> commands such as connect, disconnect, subscribe that control application >>>> sends to the controller for the devices any command will be rejected by >>>> the controller. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> For example, when used in conjunction with Non-IP Device Control (NIPC) >>>> [NIPC], >>>> commands (such as connect, disconnect, and subscribe) that control >>>> application >>>> sends to the controller for devices will be rejected by the controller. >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] To make this definition more concise, may we combine the >>>> second >>>> and fifth sentences as follows? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> mudUrl: A string that represents the URL to the Manufacturer Usage >>>> Description (MUD) file associated with this device. This >>>> attribute is optional and mutable. >>>> The mudUrl value is case sensitive and not unique. >>>> When present, this attribute may be used as described in [RFC8520]. >>>> This attribute is case sensitive and returned by default. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> mudUrl: A string that represents the URL to the Manufacturer Usage >>>> Description (MUD) file associated with this device. This >>>> attribute is optional, case sensitive, mutable, and returned by default. >>>> When present, this attribute may be used as described in [RFC8520]. >>>> >>>> The mudUrl value is case sensitive and not unique. >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions regarding the >>>> notation used >>>> in Tables 1 through 8: >>>> >>>> a) We note different notation used for "ReadOnly" in >>>> these tables ("R" vs. "RO"). Please review and let us know >>>> which form you prefer so we may update for consistency: >>>> >>>> R: ReadOnly >>>> RO: ReadOnly >>>> >>>> b) We note these notations also appear with and without a space. Please >>>> review >>>> and let us know how to update for consistency: >>>> >>>> WO: Write Only >>>> WO: WriteOnly >>>> >>>> c) We note that "Manuf" is not included in Table 2. May we remove it from >>>> the >>>> legend listed directly after the table? >>>> >>>> Manuf: Manufacturer >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] May we adjust these definitions below in order to clarify >>>> what >>>> list items "not" refers to? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> It is not mutable, read-only, generated if no certificateInfo >>>> object is provisioned, case sensitive and returned by default if it exists. >>>> ... >>>> This attribute is not required, mutable, singular and NOT case >>>> sensitive. >>>> ... >>>> It is not required, multivalued, mutable, and returned by default. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> It is not mutable. It is read only, case sensitive, and generated if no >>>> certificateInfo >>>> object is provisioned. It is returned by default if it exists. >>>> ... >>>> This attribute is not required and not case sensitive. It is mutable and >>>> singular. >>>> ... >>>> It is not required. It is multivalued, mutable, and returned by default. >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] How may we clarify "a trust anchor certificate" in the >>>> first sentence >>>> below? In addition, may we adjust the second sentence as follows, in order >>>> to >>>> clarify what list items "not" refers to? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> rootCA: A base64-encoded string as described in [RFC4648] Section 4 >>>> a trust anchor certificate. This trust anchor is applicable for >>>> certificates used for client application access. >>>> The object is not required, singular, case sensitive, and read/write. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> rootCA: A base64-encoded string as described in Section 4 of >>>> [RFC4648]. It is a trust anchor certificate applicable for >>>> certificates used for client application access. >>>> The object is not required. It is singular, case sensitive, and >>>> read/write. >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] May we adjust the text below as follows to make these >>>> list items >>>> more parallel and readable? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> SCIM provides various extension schemas, their attributes, JSON >>>> representation, and example object. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> SCIM provides various extension schemas and their attributes, along with >>>> JSON >>>> representations and example objects. >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 11) <!--[rfced] Because these following URNs appear in an ordered list, the >>>> indentation causes the lines to exceed the 72-character limit. In order to >>>> fit the character limit, we suggest converting the ordered list into a >>>> definitions list as follows. Please review. >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> >>>> ii. The pairingJustWorks extension is identified using the >>>> following schema URI: >>>> >>>> urn:ietf:params:scim:schemas:extension:pairingJustWorks:2.0:Device >>>> >>>> The Just Works pairing method does not require a key to pair >>>> devices. For completeness, the key attribute is included and >>>> is set to 'null'. The key attribute is required, immutable, >>>> and returned by default. >>>> >>>> iii. The pairingPassKey extension is identified using the following >>>> schema URI: >>>> >>>> urn:ietf:params:scim:schemas:extension:pairingPassKey:2.0:Device >>>> >>>> The passkey pairing method requires a 6-digit key to pair >>>> devices. This extension has one singular integer attribute, >>>> "key", which is required, mutable, and returned by default. >>>> The key pattern is as follows: >>>> >>>> ^[0-9]{6}$ >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> pairingJustWorks extension: Identified using the following schema >>>> URI: >>>> >>>> urn:ietf:params:scim:schemas:extension:pairingJustWorks:2.0:Device >>>> >>>> The Just Works pairing method does not require a key to pair >>>> devices. For completeness, the key attribute is included and is >>>> set to 'null'. The key attribute is required, immutable, and >>>> returned by default. >>>> >>>> pairingPassKey extension: Identified using the following >>>> schema URI: >>>> >>>> urn:ietf:params:scim:schemas:extension:pairingPassKey:2.0:Device >>>> >>>> The passkey pairing method requires a 6-digit key to pair >>>> devices. This extension has one singular integer attribute, >>>> "key", which is required, mutable, and returned by default. >>>> The key pattern is as follows: >>>> >>>> ^[0-9]{6}$ >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] How may we make the two instances below complete >>>> sentences in >>>> order to provide more context for the reader? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> 7.2. Wi-Fi Easy Connect Extension >>>> >>>> A schema that extends the device schema to enable Wi-Fi Easy Connect >>>> (otherwise known as Device Provisioning Protocol or DPP). >>>> >>>> 7.5. Zigbee Extension >>>> >>>> A schema that extends the device schema to enable the provisioning of >>>> Zigbee devices [Zigbee]. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> 7.2. Wi-Fi Easy Connect Extension >>>> >>>> This section describes a schema that extends the device schema to enable >>>> Wi-Fi Easy Connect >>>> (otherwise known as Device Provisioning Protocol (DPP)). >>>> >>>> 7.5. Zigbee Extension >>>> >>>> This section describes a schema that extends the device schema to enable >>>> the provisioning of >>>> Zigbee devices [Zigbee]. >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Section 7.4: FYI - We have added an introductory sentence >>>> to the >>>> URN below to match other instances in the document. Please review and let >>>> us >>>> know if any further updates are needed. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> The SCIM server MUST know how to process the voucher, either directly or by >>>> forwarding it along to an owner process as defined in the FDO >>>> specification. >>>> >>>> urn:ietf:params:scim:schemas:extension:fido-device-onboard:2.0:Device >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> >>>> The SCIM server MUST know how to process the voucher, either directly or by >>>> forwarding it along to an owner process as defined in the FDO >>>> specification. The extension is identified using the following schema URI: >>>> >>>> urn:ietf:params:scim:schemas:extension:fido-device-onboard:2.0:Device >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 14) <!--[rfced] We acknowledge this note included in the IANA >>>> Considerations section: >>>> >>>> Note that the line break in URNs should be removed, as should this >>>> comment. >>>> >>>> However, without the line breaks in the URNs, the tables exceed the >>>> 72-character >>>> line limit. We have left the line breaks as is. To keep the URN lines >>>> unbroken, >>>> we suggest reformatting to lists rather than tables. >>>> >>>> For example: >>>> >>>> URN: urn:iet:params:scim:schemas:extension:fido-device-onboard:2.0:Device >>>> Description: FIDO Device Onboard >>>> Resource Type: Device >>>> Reference: RFC 9944, Section 7.4 >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 15) <!-- [rfced] [BLE54]: Please review the following questions regarding >>>> this reference: >>>> >>>> a) We were unable to find "isRandom" mentioned in [BLE54] as seen >>>> below. Should this citation be updated? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> isRandom: A boolean flag taken from [BLE54]. >>>> >>>> >>>> b) We also note a few instances of "BLE core specifications 5.3" mentioned >>>> throughout this document. However, the Normative References section cites >>>> Version 5.4. Please review and let us know if/how to update accordingly. >>>> >>>> For example: >>>> >>>> "description": "The isRandom flag is taken from the BLE >>>> core specifications 5.3. If TRUE, device is using a >>>> random address. Default value is false.", >>>> >>>> >>>> c) Please review our updates to the text below. There are multiple volumes >>>> in >>>> [BLE54]; it appears Section 5.4.5 is referring to Volume 1, Part A, Section >>>> 5.4.5 of [BLE54]. Is this the correct section? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> For more information about the use of the IRK, see Section 5.4.5 of >>>> [BLE54]. >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> >>>> For more information about the use of the IRK, see Volume 1, Part A, >>>> Section 5.4.5 of [BLE54]. >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 16) <!-- [rfced] References: >>>> >>>> a) We note that [draft-brinckman-nipc] was replaced by >>>> [draft-ietf-asdf-nipc]. >>>> Should these remain as two separate references? Or, would you like to >>>> remove >>>> the citation to [draft-brinckman-nipc] and only keep the >>>> reference to [draft-ietf-asdf-nipc]? >>>> >>>> >>>> b) [JSONSchema] also exists as an Internet-Draft: >>>> https://secure-web.cisco.com/1NRPe2TkJoQInd1kwDqF_ZsFYhaGt5GUUMOLSUVDH0XvGGYa7u148O6dkJWgCFYAxNb-WWnw2fdFclMGqcYLPUohR5qcN6uLBKnvrTPKWOTw9lzU6ICLTsSdFRQmkooBkS6FusZOZFCau5XmiaqMwRxYvvLMpiI9UPSclYJlJ1h_QGC_sJlz4E6MFrfcLUWv7m7SIfriHxz9xmJUUsSfeoFrkZvWqETfwhRYTaiH5De6SjCsyquU5ACPjZpua9kMQDb4xBxiNBA4lfxLsixjxVZj048WSFPXyB1FxYet3VYeX7ntyWMrgO1D89g5RJsAH/https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-bhutton-json-schema%2F >>>> >>>> May we update this reference to point to the Internet-Draft? >>>> >>>> >>>> c) We were unable to find Version 2.0 of [DPP2] "Wi-Fi Easy Connect >>>> Specification". We did find Version 3.0 from 2022: >>>> https://secure-web.cisco.com/1CHksDHJ9rnQh4fp9wVHYzG_hf2IgYZtJAKPOuzgpHWArw5M4AAuPoZ0-tP9obhJpBDMBV-ERkMEfKxDxyMI3-r1VTUcfjcWyU2E5c4znlFCfkAyU79BPkDBW6qvj3qRuOOShcOz_FBauuSrSPYrTIGzsN0vfVJ20UmIxkjJ3-G30uoGXkrh0ia3e4NzjKA9oPCkU3RdYIJ8pTtEox4tpMdkcuwUDHreMBSJd2AVmD9IJ-Bck_h5YrLqIv52fL5Ch92gkiL9EipIUnpZpZNi_vjYBY9j7pHDupjVb8mZUQmPKDtnfEZGV39kM4OYwIah3/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.wi-fi.org%2Fsystem%2Ffiles%2FWi-Fi_Easy_Connect_Specification_v3.0.pdf >>>> >>>> Should we update this reference to point to Version 3.0 of the "Wi-Fi >>>> Easy Connect Specification"? >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> >>>> [DPP2] Wi-Fi Alliance, "Wi-Fi Easy Connect Specification", >>>> Version 2.0, 2020. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> [DPP3] Wi-Fi Alliance, "Wi-Fi Easy Connect Specification", >>>> Version 3.0, 2020, >>>> <https://secure-web.cisco.com/1_nu1gsoR8DjRwVhBD0qNylwolO0_L3AV4NAT-byzkl2_5GfQmVNyAsUBV_jsYBTMDCA60Wfwnu2-rugxZsKPN7x-6sFh56ET6Wat1sdBB2Wr0cNOlispWo2Er4DN4DmQkuXbivcKmdBSij3rRbU0tBo8DIGgZbfzQ5KvuoFXoDNS2bnCEiEE47fZrbjcOgeIQ60U3tIbQqPc0FwGlZm8HL49Awk3jGd3C9qBjuPVVAedcSKLenKojTH0gYh-jEZImbQK0SrQxtsI3e_70Iq7t5ZYCntG7YKoI8Nwvx0q3PY83kJcWsreVJ3oRcl19CwL/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.wi-fi.org%2Fsystem%2Ffiles%2FWi- >>>> Fi_Easy_Connect_Specification_v3.0.pdf>. >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 17) <!-- [rfced] Appendix C: Please review the ASCII artwork that appears >>>> at the >>>> end of this section. The submitted ASCII artwork does not render or match >>>> its SVG >>>> equivalent. --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 18) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode >>>> element >>>> in the XML file to ensure correctness. If the current list of preferred >>>> values for "type" >>>> (https://secure-web.cisco.com/1Sg7fuEo7uRBbzR0Br0jROccGOaMOEJ_hTAxT_OepNXlykk4yrVBoGgbmSybQdKUVQR-V0FhhJd79g8Z1l5uRJ_Lj8WU-nI_zVuixWesjoxmMz3ZPEnFkE9C-zRKzxr9Od-rg3JxE_5Js5xGPKfR1UKyLLqu9hR5RyBfOL800yts44a_7x6fkE-OPTi72WBOUIl_b-cLXm3MTNnjH4TDoFU3c2b5No9jBxZ5sNUezVkz6J8ULuj14XMeH6jHdCGSML9-4VAOeMXDKP1TZTUalVsmIcRVRGVFUmwEQkoXLoZ6jO2j8GcC--khHmNzuHqP3/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Frpc%2Fwiki%2Fdoku.php%3Fid%3Dsourcecode-types) >>>> does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to let us know. >>>> Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set. >>>> >>>> In addition, review each artwork element. Specifically, >>>> should any artwork element be tagged as sourcecode or another >>>> element? >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 19) <!-- [rfced] Terminology: >>>> >>>> a) We note that the following items appear differently throughout this >>>> document (with different quotation marks, capitalization, spacing, etc.). >>>> Please review and let us know if any of these should be updated for >>>> consistency: >>>> >>>> the device >>>> the Device >>>> >>>> Device schema >>>> device schema >>>> >>>> "ResourceType" schema >>>> >>>> EndpointApp schema >>>> endpointApp schema >>>> endpoint Apps extension schema >>>> schema for "EndpointApp" >>>> >>>> resource type 'Device' >>>> resource type, Device >>>> Device resource types >>>> resource "Device" >>>> >>>> 'EndpointApp' resource type >>>> 'EndpointApp' resource >>>> resource "EndpointApp" >>>> resource "endpointApp" >>>> endpointApp resource object >>>> >>>> 'deviceControl' >>>> deviceControl >>>> >>>> 'telemetry' >>>> telemetry >>>> >>>> >>>> b) We note that different forms of "true" and "false" are used throughout >>>> this >>>> document in running text. May we make these items consistent by updating to >>>> "true" and "false" (lowercase) throughout? >>>> >>>> TRUE, True > true >>>> FALSE > false >>>> >>>> >>>> c) We note a few instances of "NOT" capitalized throughout this document. >>>> May >>>> we make these instances lowercase (change "NOT" to "not") for consistency >>>> and >>>> so that these do not get mistaken for a BCP 14 keyword? >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 20) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations: >>>> >>>> a) Per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"), abbreviations should be >>>> expanded upon first use. Please review the items below and let us know >>>> if/how >>>> they should be expanded: >>>> >>>> i) How may we expand "TO2" below? >>>> >>>> After this flow is complete, the device can then first provisionally >>>> onboard, and then later receive a trust anchor through FDO's TO2 process. >>>> >>>> ii) Should "AP" be expanded as "Access Point", "Authenticating Party", or >>>> something else? >>>> >>>> If set to TRUE, the device could be expected to move within a network of >>>> APs. >>>> >>>> >>>> b) May we expand "RESTful" by providing a definition as follows? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> >>>> confirmationNumber: An integer which some solutions require in >>>> RESTful message exchange. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> >>>> confirmationNumber: An integer that some solutions require in >>>> a RESTful message exchange (where RESTful refers to the Representational >>>> State Transfer (REST) architecture). >>>> >>>> >>>> c) FYI - We have added expansions for the following abbreviations. Please >>>> review >>>> each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. >>>> >>>> Certificate Authority (CA) >>>> Near Field Communication (NFC) >>>> Non-IP Device Control (NIPC) >>>> Universally Unique Identifier (UUID) >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 21) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the >>>> online >>>> Style Guide >>>> <https://secure-web.cisco.com/1C0-wbT286kNkNS1e88NTpkZNCAMKC4Lb90skQXoRyhb23zOMZs9CfKCJCIiG6PdI8m8yVU0YkLUE6KIIsRHTR8xpgxpqIyP-KG2H2AccNy5vgzFYL7vOa4QQk4AJDnWT7FS3rxLOiboH9OFJLGadjv3fLWhoC41IXm-9grgcw-zndHXZUTOBoWLf658wswf7infpD8-l1kC_jolUbSjbmFamm-ahgcVIXkrCc9hoHF9-eUSlU7udlJUUZ0d36_nHTSyXO_OEAiBfM2QHHFwtpkT5CC5VizZM8AMreIIRIBKcU4WCJbVyGTEZ4YU2RC9o/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language> >>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this nature >>>> typically >>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers. >>>> >>>> For example, please consider whether "native" should be updated: >>>> >>>> SCIM clients MUST NOT specify this to describe native IP-based devices. >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> Thank you. >>>> >>>> Kaelin Foody and Alanna Paloma >>>> RFC Production Center >>>> >>>> >>>> On Mar 11, 2026, at 11:39 AM, [email protected] wrote: >>>> >>>> *****IMPORTANT***** >>>> >>>> Updated 2026/03/11 >>>> >>>> RFC Author(s): >>>> -------------- >>>> >>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >>>> >>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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