Three problems noted: p.13: Large gap at bottom of page. Probably can't be helped as fig 9 takes up a lot of room.
p.15: items 2) and 3) are alternatives, not sequential operations. I think 3) should be part of 2) (or a note), and 4) should be 3). p.18: note: "Figure 17 shows the Effect page for a Direction effect, and Figure 18 shows the Settings section for a Font Color effect". This suggests that two different types of information are being shown but it's actually the same info on two different effects. It should be called either the Effect page or the settings but not both. -- Hazel Russman <hazel_russ...@yahoo.co.uk> -- ----------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe send email to authors-unsubscr...@documentation.openoffice.org For additional commands send email to sy...@documentation.openoffice.org with Subject: help
