Dan, Great job on the revision.I made some minor edits to your revised chapter, including moving some figures around a bit to either fit better on the page or (in one case) to be earlier in the chapter when the topic was first mentioned. I've uploaded my edited copy here:
http://oooauthors.org/en/authors/userguide2/gettingstarted/feedback/GettingStartedWithBase_DL_13Mar06_JHW.odt --Jean
