Peter: Here are a few things I've spotted that I missed earlier:
(1) Figure 3 in Chapter 1 of the Impress Guide shows a squiggly red line under Quickstarter, caused by having "spell check as you type" activated. (This may not have been done by you, but all of us failed to catch it.) (2) Please make lines that point to things (and circles around things) heavy enough that they will be clearly visible when printed as well as when displayed on screen, especially if the lines, circles etc are a colour other than black. Example: in Figure 1 in Chapter 2 of the Impress Guide, the red lines with arrows didn't print well in black-and-white-and-grayscale. (In contrast, Figure 13 in Chapter 5, which has heavier red lines and arrows, printed fine.) (3) In Chapter 4, Figure 2 looks quite stretched out vertically to me. Normally I would resize this myself, but you can probably do a better job of it than I would. (4) Figure 5 in Chapter 4 is MUCH larger than necesary. Probably if you use a smaller arrow, then the rotating handles will be larger in proportion, and the picture can be overall much smaller yet still show what's needed. Not only is it aesthetically unpleasing (to me), but having such a large image messes up a lot of the following page breaks. (5) Chapter 5, Figure 10: On screen it looks much better than the previous version, but it doesn't print well in grayscale (nor did the earlier version); the white face of the object does not sufficiently differentiate from the pale blue background, and the pale sides tend to drop out a bit too. (6) Figure 18 in Chapter 5 is a definite improvement, including getting rid of the squiggly red line -- thank you! (7) Chapter 6, Figure 3: same problem as for Figure 5 in Chapter 4: the illustration is much too large to demonstrate the point. Also on that figure: I agree with Michele that the "centre of rotation" symbol should be moved away from the centre, as he had it in the earlier version. That is because the text talks about how you can move it from its default central position, if you want to rotate around something other than the centre. (In contrast to the similar image in Chapter 4, where the text does not mention this and so having the rotation symbol in the centre is fine.) (8) I didn't spot any remaining problems in Chapter 3, but I did crop a couple of pictures and shift the location of some text, to make the page breaks work better. I've now changed the publication date and replaced the ODT and PDF copies in the Published folder. Good work, Peter! Despite my few complaints, I know you do a better job than I on these images, and I really appreciate your work. -- Jean
