Hi guys,
Sorry about the delay in my response, I've been juggling some mysterious
hard disk issues here on my end. In general I'll hold off on a detailed
Chapter 1 and 2 review until Jean has had an opportunity to merge his
changes, and those chapters are put back into the review queue. A few
items I noticed though, after just a summary glance...
Concerning the "dialog box" over "dialog" discussion we had earlier, and
per Gary's recommendation for the WG, I noticed that Michele had made
those changes to Chapter 1, but I didn't check to see if they were made
in Chapter 2. I just thought I'd mention as a little note for when an
editing pass is made on CH. 2 for consistency. I'll be keeping an eye
out for those as I move forward with the other chapters of the WG.
Thanks for catching the character styles for Chapter 2, Michele, I
missed that for my review of both Chapter 1 and 2, but now that Jean has
me on the right track I'll know what to do for moving forward. :)
I like the brevity used in the naming of the options pages now--instead
of the full "OpenOffice.org - Options page" in the discussion text. I
think the character style was missed in only one spot for the options
page name, under the HTML Compatibility section.
I also noticed you changed "checkbox" to just simply "box" in several
places. I think it's better to leave those as "checkbox" instead, or
perhaps using the term "option."
Thanks,
Sak.
Michele wrote:
Hello SAK, Jean
I have reviewed and accepted your modifications to the chapter 2 and
chapter 8 of the Writer guide and uploaded the files without revision
marks in the draft folder of the Writer guide folder.
For the time being I will not re-submit them as I would prefer if we
could have a pass first at all the chapters, but of course if you feel
they need further edits let me know and I will put them in the review
list.
Chapter 2:
- updated the template in order to sort out the numbering issue
- tried to get consistency by using OOoEmphasis for the name of the options page
- used the same language at the beginning of each new section
- removed the numbering where there was only one numbered item.
- added some text to address the notes you placed in the text.
Chapter 8:
- accepted all the changes proposed by Jean
As usual, while accepting the changes I have learnt a lot on the
command of the language... thanks Jean!
Cheers,
Michele
