| What about I give it a try :
|
| About
| News
| Documentation
| FAQ
| Screenshots/Video
| -----------
| Online try
| Download
| ---------
| Developer
| Mail list
| Bug report
| Bibliography
| Related link
I like it.
Looks not too bad to me, but Bill made sections with headlines. So you
are trying to remove the headlines. OK I can live with that.
I like the first section above, but Screenshots/video is a bit too long
as a name. Also "Online try"? Why in the next section? What has that to
do with Download?
Screenshot/video/online try all belong into one category I think. That
is for getting a feeling of what axiom can do. From the About page there
should certainly be a link to these pages. So I would rather suggest
...
FAQ
------------
Screenshots
Video
Online Try
-----------
Download
-----------
I don't know what you mean with Developer. Should that link to
http://wiki.axiom-developer.org/SandBoxActiveAxiomDevelopers/withNavigator
I don't think that Bibliography is the best word. Would you immediately
think that you can find actual downloadable papers behind it? Is there
some native speaker who can come up with something better?
Ralf
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