I put the screens on the wiki <http://community.hackit.cx/wiki/Card_Stories_Interface_design> http://community.hackit.cx/wiki/Card_Stories_Interface_design
[David] Thanks Deb, it's a good job J I don't have major feedback apart from Xav's so you can start with his. Only thing, I only realize now that there is something I'm not a big fan of, it's the 'container' that packages the screens - ie the space for the logo and the horizontal lines with crosses that border the screen up and down. I could've said it earlier, it's just that I only realized it by seeing this final version. So if you lack time to make new proposals I understand and we can leave it for later. So, here it goes : - I think the space for the logo is too big (logo + emptiness on the right and on the left), it's eating a quarter of the page - I really like the logo but I'm not convinced by the shape that surrounds it (the beige one), I think it gives a 'rococo' look (? Not sure about the correct qualification) that doesn't fit very well with the rest of the design - I have the same feeling with the horizontal lines with the crosses (the '+') above and below the content, that I don't feel is really fitted with the rest of the design, but I don't really know how to justify this feeling. Thx ! D
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