Thanks a lot Deb, it looks good !!! Some feedback : - I think the titles of the slides are not completely easy to read. Maybe because of the black font and the picture background - I love the idea of the picto (the little guys that illustrate each slide). You should really try to complete the slides that don't have one yet, because it's really adding something. If you need ideas for some slides, let me know ! Also, the first time I looked at the slides, it was not always easy for me to notice them on the slide. Because people look quickly at slides, it's always important to make their life as easy as possible. For this, I would suggest to keep, for the picto of each slide, the same size, the same color (black or green or white for instance, which are colors you used, could do the trick) and the same spot on the slide. This way, a simple glimpse at the title of the slide and the associated picto helps to understand. What do you think ? - Based on these first two feedbacks, I could imagine to dedicate a spot on the upper right of each slide for the title and the picto, making the title easier to read and the picto immediatly seen because always at this same place. Is it a good idea ? - Also, some titles are too long, they are displayed on two lines so it doesn't look good. Apart from rewriting the titles, any idea how we could solve that ?
thx a lot, d 2010/10/22 Deborah - Tartaruga Feliz <[email protected]> > Here's the final pitch David, you can modify as much as you want :) > > Thanks, > > Deborah > > > -- > > _______________________________________________ > Farsides mailing list - [email protected] > > Wiki: http://farsides.com/ > List: http://farsides.com/ml/ > Forum: http://farsides.com/forum/ > Ideas: http://farsides.com/ideas/ > Chat: http://farsides.com/chat/ >
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