Just a note here, everything that I sent you needs to be proof-read before "going to press", if possible.
Thanks On Tue, Jan 4, 2011 at 4:38 AM, david blanchard <[email protected]>wrote: > Cool ! > > 1) Organization : I really like the 'who we are'. I still have a small > doubt regarding the 'new paradigm' because I don't really know how the space > aspect will be incarnated in missions, but we can still discuss it (we > should be able to make small changes in the text even once it's integrated). > > -> Deb can you please integrate the text in the page so that we can check > the length ? > > 2) Mission : before providing feedback, I'm going to create a mission based > on your text so that we can all play it, it's the best way to see how it > looks in real conditions. > But I can already safely say that I like the overall structure of the > mission, I think it's the good path. > > Thanks a lot for delivering on such short timing, it's really nice. > > D > > > > On 04/01/2011 04:40, Alex Vachon wrote: > >> This is a link to the most recent version of the organization home page, >> and the chat conversation that will take place there. >> >> >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >> < >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >> > >> On Mon, Jan 3, 2011 at 6:13 PM, Alex Vachon >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> >> wrote: >> >> Good stuff :-) >> >> >> On Mon, Jan 3, 2011 at 5:37 AM, david blanchard >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> >> >> - I liked the idea of "One", do you think we could mention >> it maybe in >> the overall goal of the organization ? >> >> >> For the idea of One, here is something that Xavier had written - >> you might find it useful : >> 11:20:06 ‹Xavier› David> "Become an agent of one of the most >> ambitious agencies, the Human Project, who seeks to unite the >> world under a unique banner" >> 03/01/2011 11:21:32 ‹Xavier› "The Human Project - One World, One >> Government" >> >> >> On 01/01/2011 22:40, Alex Vachon wrote: >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Farsides mailing list - [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> >> >> Wiki: http://farsides.com/ >> List: http://farsides.com/ml/ >> Forum: http://farsides.com/forum/ >> Ideas: http://farsides.com/ideas/ >> Chat: http://farsides.com/chat/ >> >> >> >> >> -- >> Best, >> >> Alex Vachon >> >> cartouchecreations.com <http://cartouchecreations.com> >> Follow me on Twitter <http://twitter.com/cartouchefilms> >> Follow me on Facebook < >> http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=602172865> >> Montreal Loves New York Loves Montreal >> <http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_135269469856078&ap=1> >> >> New York - Montreal - Vancouver >> >> >> >> >> >> -- >> Best, >> >> Alex Vachon >> >> cartouchecreations.com <http://cartouchecreations.com> >> Follow me on Twitter <http://twitter.com/cartouchefilms> >> Follow me on Facebook <http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=602172865> >> Montreal Loves New York Loves Montreal >> <http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_135269469856078&ap=1> >> >> New York - Montreal - Vancouver >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Farsides mailing list - [email protected] >> >> Wiki: http://farsides.com/ >> List: http://farsides.com/ml/ >> Forum: http://farsides.com/forum/ >> Ideas: http://farsides.com/ideas/ >> Chat: http://farsides.com/chat/ >> > _______________________________________________ > Farsides mailing list - [email protected] > > Wiki: http://farsides.com/ > List: http://farsides.com/ml/ > Forum: http://farsides.com/forum/ > Ideas: http://farsides.com/ideas/ > Chat: http://farsides.com/chat/ > -- Best, Alex Vachon cartouchecreations.com Follow me on Twitter <http://twitter.com/cartouchefilms> Follow me on Facebook <http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=602172865> Montreal Loves New York Loves Montreal<http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_135269469856078&ap=1> New York - Montreal - Vancouver
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