On Tue, 2010-10-05 at 13:09 +0200, Deborah - Tartaruga Feliz wrote:
> Hi everyone!
> I finished the interface design for Card Stories! Hurray!
> I put the screens on the wiki
> http://community.hackit.cx/wiki/Card_Stories_Interface_design
Yey!!! I've already told you in the past, but I really love the
design : ) It's very fresh and fits very well with the cards design.
Of course, I do have some comments about stuff to change :D
* Interface01.png: On the buttons, the writing is brown on brown,
which makes it difficult to read
* Interface01.png: It's missing some info about the player,
mentionned in the specifications (but not on the mockups, true -
we'll need to make sure the mockups include all the information
next time): "On the player's profile, there is, to begin with,
1) the number of games played as author and as player, 2) and
for each, the number of games won (and %), 3) and the overall
number of games played/won/% of success"
* Interface05.png: Not finished, but it's ok I think, this has
changed since the initial mockups and is going to change again
in beta1.2, so we can leave it on the side until then
* Interface06.png: I'm not a fan of the table background - I think
it contrasts too much with the rest of the interface and the
other screens. Maybe a lighter color?
* Interface06.png: The visual differenciation in the first column
between the games where you are an author or a player is really
nice - I think the second column is missing the same kind of
visual identification. Would be good to see immediately which
are the ones needing attention, and recognize visually, maybe
with an icon, in which phase of the game it is. The third column
(the game's expression), would probably gain visually by putting
quotes around it, or italic, or something that shows it's a
quote.
* Interface09.png: Same type of comments as Interface06.png
* Interface011.png: It's missing the original sentence that
corresponds to the cards. The top of the page is also a bit
weird, with the space on the left of the cards - maybe put a
character with a bubble like you did with all the other screens?
* On the wiki page, it's missing the first screen you did a few
weeks ago, where the author choses his first card.
And one more thing, about the font. I think we forgot to check the
license of the font you use for titles & bubble, and the fact that it
can be embedded online... Can you give me the link to where you've got
it?
> There are some screens that I don't have the mockup, so I need to test
> the whole game to see which screens are still missing some design.
> When can I try the final version of the game working on facebook so I
> can do that?
Yes - what you have produced should already allow Illya to make the game
much nicer. Then if we realize that something is missing during the
course of the design integration, you can make the additional screens
then.
> Also, I need an approval for all the screens so I can make the psds
> with the % and the pixels for the developers to start the
> integration :)
I'll let you have a look first - let me know what you think of the
comments : )
Thanks Deborah!
Xavier.
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