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You can reach the person managing the list at beginners-ow...@haskell.org When replying, please edit your Subject line so it is more specific than "Re: Contents of Beginners digest..." Today's Topics: 1. Re: Hutton ex 7.7 and 7.8 (C Maeder) ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Message: 1 Date: Mon, 27 Aug 2018 10:02:48 +0200 From: C Maeder <chr.mae...@web.de> To: fa...@ariis.it Cc: The Haskell-Beginners Mailing List - Discussion of primarily beginner-level topics related to Haskell <Beginners@haskell.org> Subject: Re: [Haskell-beginners] Hutton ex 7.7 and 7.8 Message-ID: <7c43aeb1-80ea-5bc5-e683-002cfeeea...@web.de> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Hi, see my comments below Am 24.08.2018 um 11:45 schrieb trent shipley: > > I am mostly looking for style feedback, although if there are any > obvious logic errors, I'd be "happy" to learn about those too. [...] let me ignore the exercise text > > type Bit = Int A bit is not an Int! A user-defined type (or Bool) would be type safer (although arithmetic is missing). > > byte :: Int > byte = 8 > > parityByte :: Int > parityByte = 9 > > bin2int :: [Bit] -> Int > bin2int = foldr (\x y -> x + 2 * y) 0 use here "bit2int x" if bits are no ints. > > -- Hutton, Graham. Programming in Haskell (Kindle Locations 2647-2649). > Cambridge University Press. Kindle Edition. > > int2bin :: Int -> [Bit] > int2bin 0 = [] > int2bin n = n `mod` 2 : int2bin (n `div` 2) here you could use "even n" if bits are Bool. > > -- Hutton, Graham. Programming in Haskell (Kindle Locations 2654-2656). > Cambridge University Press. Kindle Edition. > > make8 :: [Bit] -> [Bit] > make8 bits = addParity (take byte (bits ++ repeat 0)) > > -- Parity functions > > addParity :: [Bit] -> [Bit] > addParity xs = if even (sum xs) > then xs ++ [0] > else xs ++ [1] appending the parity (at the end of a list) is inefficient. The parity could be the first bit if it is not stored separately. > > checkParity :: [Bit] -> Bool > checkParity xs = (((even . sum) (take ((length xs) - 1) xs)) == > ((even . last) xs)) || > (((odd . sum) (take ((length xs) - 1) xs)) == > ((odd . last) xs)) here is too much duplicate code! You could also use the function "init", if the input list xs is (checked to be) non-empty. > > errorParity :: [Bit] -> ([Bit], Bool) > errorParity xs = if checkParity xs > then (xs, checkParity xs) > else error "Parity error" the result of this function is nonsense. The input (usually) does not need to be returned and the boolean result can only be true, since the other case fails with a runtime error. > > dropParity :: [Bit] -> [Bit] > dropParity xs = take ((length xs) - 1) xs this function could have been reused in checkParity. > > -- Hutton, Graham. Programming in Haskell (Kindle Locations 2662-2663). > Cambridge University Press. Kindle Edition. > > -- TRANSMISSION > > encode :: String -> [Bit] > encode = concat . map (make8 . int2bin . ord) > > -- Hutton, Graham. Programming in Haskell (Kindle Locations 2673-2675). > Cambridge University Press. Kindle Edition. > > chop8 :: [Bit] -> [[Bit]] > chop8 [] = [] > chop8 bits = (dropParity . fst . errorParity) (take parityByte bits) : > chop8 (drop parityByte bits) use "splitAt" instead of take and drop. (It may not be very nice to fail with a runtime error by using errorParity.) > > -- Hutton, Graham. Programming in Haskell (Kindle Locations 2681-2683). > Cambridge University Press. Kindle Edition. > > decode :: [Bit] -> String > decode = map (chr . bin2int) . chop8 > > -- Hutton, Graham. Programming in Haskell (Kindle Locations 2686-2688). > Cambridge University Press. Kindle Edition. > > -- channel :: [Bit] -> [Bit] > -- channel = id > > channel :: [Bit] -> [Bit] > channel = tail "tail" is partial! This should be documented (if this is ok). Did you try to transmit an empty string? Cheers Christian > > -- Hutton, Graham. Programming in Haskell (Kindle Locations 2696-2697). > Cambridge University Press. Kindle Edition. > > transmit :: String -> String > transmit = decode . channel . encode > > -- Hutton, Graham. Programming in Haskell (Kindle Locations 2694-2695). > Cambridge University Press. Kindle Edition. > > > _______________________________________________ > Beginners mailing list > Beginners@haskell.org > http://mail.haskell.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/beginners > ------------------------------ Subject: Digest Footer _______________________________________________ Beginners mailing list Beginners@haskell.org http://mail.haskell.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/beginners ------------------------------ End of Beginners Digest, Vol 122, Issue 19 ******************************************