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Today's Topics:
1. Code Review of Caesar-Cipher (chrysaetos99)
2. Re: Code Review of Caesar-Cipher (Daniel van de Ghinste)
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Date: Wed, 20 May 2020 20:26:37 +0200
From: chrysaetos99 <chrysaeto...@posteo.de>
To: beginners@haskell.org
Subject: [Haskell-beginners] Code Review of Caesar-Cipher
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Background
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I am a total beginner in Haskell, so after reading the "Starting
out"-chapter of "Learn you a Haskell", I wanted to create my first
program that actually does something.
I decided to do the famous Caesar-Cipher.
Code
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See attachment.
Question(s)
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- How can this code be improved in general?
- Do I follow the style guide of Haskell (indentation, etc.)?
- I have a background in imperative languages. Did I do something that
is untypical for functional programming languages?
I would appreciate any suggestions.
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Please note: I also asked this question on
https://codereview.stackexchange.com/questions/242529/caesar-cipher-implementation,
but didn't receive an answer that really answered all my questions.
Kind regards
chrysaetos99
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Date: Wed, 20 May 2020 23:37:18 +0200
From: Daniel van de Ghinste <danielvandeghin...@gmail.com>
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beginner-level topics related to Haskell <beginners@haskell.org>
Subject: Re: [Haskell-beginners] Code Review of Caesar-Cipher
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I’m no guru, so somebody please feel free to correct my advice here. I’m trying
to get a bit more active in reading these mailing lists and giving advice as I
believe it’ll help me become better in my own understnading.
First thing, well done! It works! Nice job for the beginning of your haskell
journey :) Ill be focusing on your first and third question. Your indentations
seem fine here so far.
There are many different approaches you could take as you learn more, but here
are some things I noticed:
******************** 1)
isAlphabetic :: Char -> Bool
isAlphabetic char = char >= 'A' && char <= ‘Z'
I feel this would be more readable as a literal, though you function works. The
<= && => feel very much like imperative style to me
isAlphabetic :: Char -> Bool
isAlphabetic char = elem char ['A'..'Z']
That feel nicer to me. ‘Elem' works like ‘in’ in some other languages and has
the type:
elem :: (Eq a, Foldable t) => a -> t a -> Bool
Lists are a ‘foldable t’ as would be a binary tree (or some other type of
tree). Just think of ‘foldable’ as something you can iterate over/through. It
as something you can iterate over.
The ‘..’ Syntax in the expression [‘A’..’Z’] works on any type which is a
member of the ‘Enum’ type class, which is to say it has some type of
successor/predecessor order. A comes after b, c comes after b and so on.
So typing [‘A’..’Z’] just creates a literal list of the characters from ‘A’ to
‘Z’.
Come to think of it, the above would be even nicer if you wrote it in ‘point
free style’ (notice the lack of a ‘char’ in my expected isAlphabetic function
parameters, despite it being in the type signature) which would require you to
‘flip’ the elem function so the Char becomes the second argument expected
rather than the first
alphabetLength :: Int
alphabetLength = length alphabet
alphabet :: [Char]
alphabet = ['A'..'Z']
isAlphabetic :: Char -> Bool
isAlphabetic = flip elem alphabet
****************************** 2)
Try to avoid so much logic in your encrypt and decrypt functions (nested ‘if’
’then’ ‘else’ makes it harder to follow). Also, I don’t know why you are having
your functions here return an Int and letting your ‘encrypt’ and ‘decrypt’
functions do the work of changing them back into a Char. It seems to me if you
give a Char to your encryptChar function, you should get back an encrypted
Char. Make these functions below finish their work. I assume you were tripping
yourself up with what to return if isAlphabetic is false, but just return the
char value unchanged. Then the type signature of these 2 functions below could
be Char -> Int -> Char instead
encryptChar :: Char -> Int -> Int
encryptChar char shift = if isAlphabetic char --
Only encrypt A...Z
then (if ord char + shift > ord 'Z' --
"Z" with shift 3 becomes "C" and not "]"
then ord char + shift - alphabetLength
else ord char + shift)
else ord char
decryptChar :: Char -> Int -> Int
decryptChar char shift = if isAlphabetic char
then (if ord char - shift < ord 'A'
then ord char - shift + alphabetLength
else ord char - shift)
else ord char
Also, notice how similar the 2 functions are. These could be combined. The only
difference between them is the ‘+’ and ‘-‘ operations switching. Maybe
something like the following
shiftChar :: Int -> Char -> Char
shiftChar n c
| isAlphabetic c = chr ((((ord c + n) - base) `mod` alphabetLength) + base)
| otherwise = c
where base = 65
This version works for negative or positive values of n. So it can be used to
encrypt and decrypt. My brackets are a bit ugly, but I’m getting lazy (it’s
late here).
The use of `mod` here (the infix version of the modulo operator, % in some
other languages like python) means we can accept arbitrarily large values of n
to our function, and it just wraps around.
We can also accept negative values.
The pipe syntax ‘|’ is just a neater way of doing if else statements (see
guards for more info)
The 65 here is because ‘ord' is defined for all possible Char values. You’re
defining your valid range for this cipher to capital alphabetic characters,
which starts at 65:
*Main> fmap ord ['A'..'Z']
[65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90]
— the corresponding number for each capital letter in order.
If you haven’t come across fmap yet, it’s the same as map for lists, but you
can use it on structures other than lists - see Functors later in your Haskell
education :)
basically it applies the function to each of the value in the list here
************************************ 3)
Lastly, your encrypt and decrypt functions
encrypt :: String -> Int -> String
encrypt string shift = [chr (encryptChar (toUpper x) shift) | x <- string] --
"Loop" through string to encrypt char by char
decrypt :: String -> Int -> String
decrypt string shift = [chr (decryptChar (toUpper x) shift) | x <- string]
I like your use of list comprehensions here :) though as mentioned before I
don’t think you should be using the chr function here, rather your encryptChar
and decryptChar functions should be doing that to the values they return.
Because I changed other pieces in the code, I’ll show you another way of doing
this part now.
encrypt' :: Int -> String -> String
encrypt' x = fmap (shiftChar x)
decrypt' :: Int -> String -> String
decrypt' x = encrypt' (negate x)
Here I’m using ‘point free’ style again only referencing the first of the two
parameters expected by encrypt’. Because we changed our other function in
answer ******2 on this mail, encrypt’ and decrypt’ are just the inverse of each
other. So decrypt' is defined in terms of encrypt’ but just negates the number
passed to encrypt’. As you might expect, negate just makes positive numbers
negative, and negative ones positive.
In encrypt’ I also use fmap again, because in Haskell a String is just a type
alias for a list of Characters ( type String = [Char]), so we are just mapping
the function shiftChar, with the number already baked in, to each character in
the list of character (string) which will be passed to this function.
Please find attached my edits to your source file if you wanna see it in full
and play around with it.
Best regards,
Lord_Luvat
P.S. Let me know if I’m a bad teacher, or pitching this response at the wrong
level :) I’m trying to learn here too.
> On 20 May 2020, at 20:26, chrysaetos99 <chrysaeto...@posteo.de> wrote:
>
> Background
> ----------
> I am a total beginner in Haskell, so after reading the "Starting out"-chapter
> of "Learn you a Haskell", I wanted to create my first program that actually
> does something.
>
> I decided to do the famous Caesar-Cipher.
>
>
> Code
> ----
> See attachment.
>
>
> Question(s)
>
> -----------
>
> - How can this code be improved in general?
> - Do I follow the style guide of Haskell (indentation, etc.)?
> - I have a background in imperative languages. Did I do something that is
> untypical for functional programming languages?
>
> I would appreciate any suggestions.
>
> ---
>
> Please note: I also asked this question on
> https://codereview.stackexchange.com/questions/242529/caesar-cipher-implementation,
> but didn't receive an answer that really answered all my questions.
>
>
> Kind regards
>
> chrysaetos99
>
>
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